Thank you ....

By Anoblechicken

I'm calling you here
to comfort my thoughts
tell me everythings okay

You gave me a hug
held my hand
and saved my life today

You put love in my heart
a smile on my face
and in my mind

you rewound time to
to help me see
what i couldn't find

I felt so weak but you
looked at who I was
and everything i could be

I wanted to let you know
i thank you
for finally helping me see

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Published on Sunday, January 25, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Thank you ...."

A former member wrote: Maybe one day I can have someone like that in my life, it must make you feel really great to have the support and love of someone. Nice poem, not at all cheesy.
On Monday, January 26, 2004, flying_fox (571) wrote:

this is so well expressed. I really like it. FF
On Sunday, January 25, 2004, Alanarchy (1168) wrote:

Very sweet. This was a great read. Nicely done.
On Sunday, January 25, 2004, purr_verse (1052) wrote:

as Solace said, this is very sweet. the geniune emotion is clear. :) purr
On Sunday, January 25, 2004, Solace (1065) wrote:

Awwwww thats the second sweet poem i've seen today... I'm beginning to have a permanent smile :) thanks chicken for cheering me up!
On Sunday, January 25, 2004, Drifter (265) wrote:

nice, i can't comment more. i just keep deleting what i write. Maybe when i'm sober :)
On Sunday, January 25, 2004, yslehc (334) wrote:

i'm so lucky to have someone like that... nice write, thnx for sharing