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Thank you ....
By Anoblechicken
I'm calling you here
to comfort my thoughts
tell me everythings okay
You gave me a hug
held my hand
and saved my life today
You put love in my heart
a smile on my face
and in my mind
you rewound time to
to help me see
what i couldn't find
I felt so weak but you
looked at who I was
and everything i could be
I wanted to let you know
i thank you
for finally helping me see
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Copyright 2004 Anoblechicken
Published on Sunday, January 25, 2004.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
Maybe one day I can have someone like that in my life, it must make you feel really great to have the support and love of someone. Nice poem, not at all cheesy.
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On Monday, January 26, 2004, flying_fox
(573)
wrote:
this is so well expressed. I really like it. FF
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On Sunday, January 25, 2004, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
Very sweet. This was a great read. Nicely done.
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On Sunday, January 25, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
as Solace said, this is very sweet. the geniune emotion is clear. :) purr
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On Sunday, January 25, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Awwwww thats the second sweet poem i've seen today... I'm beginning to have a permanent smile :) thanks chicken for cheering me up!
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On Sunday, January 25, 2004, Drifter
(268) wrote:
nice, i can't comment more. i just keep deleting what i write. Maybe when i'm sober :)
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On Sunday, January 25, 2004, yslehc
(334) wrote:
i'm so lucky to have someone like that... nice write, thnx for sharing
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