Comments by All Members
- "I'm with dwells. I like the development of this. The way you worked up to the ending. It's very good. The whole work as a whole. Brava. Good job.......really."
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Her Body is an Ocean" by Dragonfly
- "that's just...beautiful...for want of a better word...sometimes freedom can feel lost and alone, unguided..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Freedom" by Dragonfly
- "The good thing about life is that it constantly changes.
The bad thing about life is that it constantly changes.
The good thing about life is that it never changes.
The bad thing about life is that it never changes.
Somehow all the above is true. Thanks for your write. Your poem made me ponder. "
Posted by lordbongo on "Lost" by Dragonfly
- "This is incredible, and I definitely relate to this. I am so happy that you found your voice, and that you speak it more than just typing it. Thank you for sharing this!"
Posted by Unknown on "Learning to Lead" by Dragonfly
- "Unusual write and speaks volumes to me. Read "PASSION" that I posted last week, if you want one possible reason for this feeling. But I believe there is more at work here than any simple explanation, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Two is a Lonley Number" by Dragonfly
- "wow this is really beautiful... it'd be nice if more people bore such passion (outside of this website, that is)"
Posted by RubyXero on "My Light" by Dragonfly
- "This was quite the Nature piece and very well done. Especially enjoyed the first part, prior to Adam and Eve from the dark side, but then their progeny have certainly caused some Hell on earth. Thanks for posting this."
Posted by dwells on "Natural Show" by Dragonfly
- "That was an awesome read! Set the scene in my mind beautifully, kinda makes me all wistful actually,amongst other things. ~Ash"
Posted by Ashteroth on "Natural Show" by Dragonfly
- "Last five lines could use a little work on the forced rhymes I think, but I really enjoyed reading this. It was suggestively erotic and titillating, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Garden" by Dragonfly
- "Well sir seems as though you are on a roll.. It happens to me when i'll have the desire to write then long time in between.. I like the direction your going.. Unleashing your fellings.. It makes for good reading.. Thank you,,,"
Posted by Devilish on "Garden" by Dragonfly
- "Great imagery and strong emotion - painful piece for the reader as well as the writer, I'm sure. My suggestion is to revise and fix those few typos to make sure nothing detracts from the feel of the poem. Otherwise, nice work."
Posted by wilted on "Hand in My Hand" by Dragonfly
- "Sorry about your friend, sounds like his buddies pulled the rug out from under him? Good simile going on here, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Willow Tree" by Dragonfly
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