Garden

By Dragonfly

I'd never seen such beautiful scenery
her hills and valleys arching perfectly
and I rested on each with equal appreciation
sending sign of a great sensation
A few of her flowers bloomed in her garden
and beckoned me in.
Fingers grazing on soft skin.
Gently bitting on her fruit.
Taking some for my loot.
And thenĀ I left her garden that same night
leaving quite quickly without a sight.
I still dream of that forbidden fruit
and still keep something from my loot.
A little bit of happy sun
a sign of all that was fun.

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Copyright 2011 purpleydinos
Published on Saturday, December 3, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Lust? I see the longing in this

  • dwells On Sunday, December 4, 2011, dwells (4284)By person wrote:

    Last five lines could use a little work on the forced rhymes I think, but I really enjoyed reading this. It was suggestively erotic and titillating, thanks.

  • Devilish On Saturday, December 3, 2011, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    Well sir seems as though you are on a roll.. It happens to me when i'll have the desire to write then long time in between.. I like the direction your going.. Unleashing your fellings.. It makes for good reading.. Thank you,,, Scholar

  • Alchemist On Saturday, December 3, 2011, Alchemist (688)By person wrote:

    This has a very sensual feel to it. Great write.

  • Dreamzz On Saturday, December 3, 2011, Dreamzz (19)By person wrote:

    Ew.... But in a good way :D nice.

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