Her Body is an Ocean
By Dragonfly
Her body is an ocean
where people go to play,
but when they visit
they can't escape.
They Drown in her love
as it washes over
them
with showers of kisses and hugs
Dump your trash
or bodies
in her for her tides will
wash away your sins.
Her coral reef protecting
your soul from breaking
into pieces
on her floor
where creatures of midnight lurk;
where even light
is too afraid to dance.
For her heart lies there too
in
that darkness of night
locked up away
with no where to hide.
With creatures of midnight
who wear her own face.
She
feels secure, alone in this place
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Copyright 2011 purpleydinos
Published on Friday, December 2, 2011.
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A former member wrote:
loved it, very inspireing
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On Wednesday, December 7, 2011, Ladyhawke
(392) wrote:
I'm with dwells. I like the development of this. The way you worked up to the ending. It's very good. The whole work as a whole. Brava. Good job.......really.
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On Saturday, December 3, 2011, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Great simile and development with some novel twists and turns, thanks.
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On Friday, December 2, 2011, rosemaiden
(180) wrote:
I like this....its like to sides to her...her beauty and her demon :)...nice write
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On Friday, December 2, 2011, serenesavage91
(33) wrote:
Nice, i like this, I like different directions yo took this.
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On Friday, December 2, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Wow!! Hmmmm.. Don't know what to say. Except I love how many directions your poetry goes...