Comments by All Members
- "The twist of this was something subtle in a way I didn't quite see it until I read the tags. Then I had to reread the poem in a different light. At first it was darkly beautiful to me, then tragic.
But still very well penned. I like this. I liked this a lot. Everything flowed very well from stanza to stanza, and your imagery was spot on. Even with the subject matter, it was...a gorgeous kind of rotting.
Thank you very much for sharing. Pretty little things are always the most captivating, aren't they? "
Posted by Unknown on " She was a pretty little thing " by With love_Crow
- "I agree with Stephanie, this one makes an individual think a bit, that question mark at the end left me hanging, that is good and very clever."
Posted by Unknown on "Burning" by With love_Crow
- "This really made me think. It was clever. I loved its depth . I keep getting something different each time I read it. Very much a catch 22 feel about it. X "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Burning" by With love_Crow
- "I read your tags but this could just as well apply to an old lover too. Good to see you back again!"
Posted by dwells on "Burning" by With love_Crow
- "I felt the feeling in this work I really did
The fear, The sadness and the empty ness
I loved it "
Posted by Unknown on "Souless" by With love_Crow
- "I don’t know why all those other people hated your poem so much, don’t pay attention to those jerks. No, I’m just kidding, those guys are right, this is a very good poem, it’s very catchy, and it could easily be turned into a song."
Posted by Dreamscape on "Souless" by With love_Crow
- "This felt more like metaphorical suicide than physical the way I read it. Very well penned, made me think about the many hurts that can lead to rebirths throughout a lifetime. Thanks - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Man on the Ledge" by With love_Crow
- "Aerodynamically implausible, no matter how hard you flap your arms, but I always wanted to try, more than once in my dreams. Cheers WLC!"
Posted by dwells on "Man on the Ledge" by With love_Crow
- "I tried to comment this morning but my mojo was on the fritz. So good to see you posting again and beware the takers, Cheers WLC!"
Posted by dwells on "Romanticide" by With love_Crow
- "This is so involved! The ideas and metaphors make for a fab read and the layout it very well constructed again! I love your style! ( sounds like he will always be lonely!) "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Paint you...Blue" by With love_Crow
- "They condemn you to your nature to forgive... that line speaks volumes. This poem really reminds me of my friend.. it hurts so much seeing her toyed with. Dead on poem!"
Posted by FearlessDragon on "Romanticide" by With love_Crow
- "...that is a starkly created title above the words of dream-filled girls who rush blindly into the webs of the arachnids among us..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Romanticide" by With love_Crow
- "A seasonal piece par excellence, but be careful of that weed - it makes you stoopid. Much enjoyed and sorry I missed this gem earlier, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Next Fall" by With love_Crow
- "I think fadedblues comment said it perfectly. you my darling are a beautiful poetess. long time no see. hugs.."
Posted by Devilish on "Next Fall" by With love_Crow
- "...striking. this moved quickly thru rhymed links, singing a ballad of infatuation that could not bloom in cold ground..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Next Fall" by With love_Crow
- "it's like every fall will be a grim reminder. shades of romance linger underneath the cold. you definitely chose a good time to post this chilly piece. well done ;-)"
Posted by Patches on "Next Fall" by With love_Crow
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