Paint you...Blue
By With love_Crow
I'll run my hands along your
canvass
Hung in blank, forgotten frames
And as I stare upon
that hue
My fingers itch to paint you blue
You are colorless,
encased in black
It being the only distinction of your existence
We both know how much those words ring true
And yet you struggle
against my tainted muse
What battle is there left to fight?
Why must you take up arms against my brush?
This color represents
all that is you
It would stand for a different kind of view
You are like the ocean, luring me to drown
Like weeds that grow
in the cracks of sidewalks
Let me show you how much you grew
How
deep this hole is that you've sunk me into
I'll make a masterpiece,
a dying art of your face
The side I cannot capture in a digital snap
The eyes of who you are will surely shine through
Behind windowless
planes of the mask that you had drew
Sin stands out nicely,
a shadow against this page
You cannot hide behind darkened curtains
of illusion you have sewn
How will you keep the light from reflecting
scars anew?
Can you run from the anchor shipwrecking you to a sea
of blue?
Comments on "Paint you...Blue"
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On Monday, December 24, 2012, Stephanie Sideways
(276) wrote:
This is so involved! The ideas and metaphors make for a fab read and the layout it very well constructed again! I love your style! ( sounds like he will always be lonely!)
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A former member wrote:
i like it
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A former member wrote:
"Sin stands out nicely, a shadow against this page
You cannot hide behind darkened curtains of illusion you have sewn
How will you keep the light from reflecting scars anew?" Dynamic lines and most favored.
Impressive and Painted Magnificence!
Thank you for Imparting
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On Sunday, October 16, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Fan Fucking Tastic... A I stare upon that hue... My fingers itch to paint you blue... I love that.... LOve it!!!
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On Thursday, October 13, 2011, Ladyhawke
(392) wrote:
I read this yesterday, but was unable to find the words to comment accurately enough to voice my thoughts on this. I am still unable, but I was no means going to pass by without letting you know how much I love this poem. You, my friend, have talent. Show us more of this wonderful skill you posses. Brava!!
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A former member wrote:
excellently created dude. what a thing to say. wonderful. :)