Souless

By With love_Crow

Can't you see me
See me falling
Crawling, calling
From this cell

Can't you hear it
Hear it singing
Haunting, longing
In this Hell

Can't you taste it
Taste its sweetness
Poisonous, venemous
Bitter as well

Now I feel it
Feel it clawing
Clutching, gnawing
Till I sell

A soul of sorrow
Godless, mourning
Drowning, roaring
Like church bells

Now I'm empty
Filled with nothing
Something, everything
Can't you tell?

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Copyright 2011 With love_Crow
Published on Wednesday, October 12, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I felt the feeling in this work I really did The fear, The sadness and the empty ness I loved it

  • Dreamscape On Wednesday, January 2, 2013, Dreamscape (22)By person wrote:

    I don’t know why all those other people hated your poem so much, don’t pay attention to those jerks. No, I’m just kidding, those guys are right, this is a very good poem, it’s very catchy, and it could easily be turned into a song.

  • Stephanie Sideways On Monday, December 24, 2012, Stephanie Sideways (276)By person wrote:

    BRILLIANT! So well thought out! So much feeling, frustration , pain and emotion expressed very clearly! Loved it, lived it!

  • A former member wrote: Amazing theme! great write.

  • A former member wrote: i flippen loved this it was beautiful and flowed nicely

  • grantrizmo2002 On Monday, February 20, 2012, grantrizmo2002 (17)By person wrote:

    almost haunting. Absolutely awesome.

  • FadedBlues On Wednesday, February 1, 2012, FadedBlues (2172)By person wrote:

    ...Beautiful...stong influences form Poe in this...

  • A former member wrote: Your writing is off the chain. I really love it.

  • A former member wrote: Expressive and Artistic! A Truly Deserved Ovation. Mindful Flow! Attractive to the eye and Mind! Thank you for your Consideration and Commendation.... My Friend!

  • Mona On Wednesday, November 9, 2011, Mona (31)By person wrote:

    so emotive this poem made me feel tearful great work!

  • Devilish On Wednesday, October 12, 2011, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    HELL FUCKIN YEAH!!! I love it!! You have perfect ryhme sceme ... Beautiful expression... And perfect delivery! I'm fucking impressed ... and for this to be your first post, you will love it here... Welcome to DarkPoetry... You eva wana play with the DEvil, im a click away... Scholar

  • With love_Crow On Thursday, October 13, 2011, With love_Crow (83)By person wrote:

    Thank you :)

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