Burning

By With love_Crow

Like the smoke
You disappear
Only to show when things
Around you burn
When will you learn
That once the fire is out
There will be nothing left
To yearn for?

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Published on Tuesday, March 5, 2013. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Burning"

A former member wrote: I agree with Stephanie, this one makes an individual think a bit, that question mark at the end left me hanging, that is good and very clever.
On Tuesday, March 5, 2013, Stephanie Sideways (276) wrote:

This really made me think. It was clever. I loved its depth . I keep getting something different each time I read it. Very much a catch 22 feel about it. X
On Tuesday, March 5, 2013, dwells (4177) wrote:

I read your tags but this could just as well apply to an old lover too. Good to see you back again!