Comments by All Members
- "Well, what can I even say about this. Hard hitting for sure, it is very well thought out. Really enjoyed it though.it deserves the dark label we slap on every poem posted here "
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Knights and a Princess" by Dethuntillite
- "Sounds like maybe an elderly family member is on his deathbed. A lonely death to begin a journey unmourned and unremarkable in its finality. Very sad and fraught with human frailties, thanks for this somber piece."
Posted by dwells on "The bed YOU made" by Dethuntillite
- "I think this was a prayer to a religion of wealth - to banish the spiteful, shallow, and gullible people from your life. Quite sardonic and interesting, thanks. "
Posted by dwells on "Bring them Darkness" by Dethuntillite
- "All I gotta' say is if you have that capability in your vocabulary, your motivation for being awesome in life should be your writing. Keep at it boss, you could be big; I promise you."
Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "How can i Not" by Dethuntillite
- "Dethuntillite. The only way i can show how i go thru life. I am lost in death, but one of the few things I believe in is that if I can holdout long enough the delusions and the despair that I've created will one day be vague memories and that light will find me:)"
Posted by Dethuntillite on "The world never showed her" by Dethuntillite
- "Tremendous piece! "Fading will forever be hers" (I think you dropped the "be"). You had another poem that was quite special a few days ago. THanks so much and welcome! How did you come by this user / screen name (sounds French maybe?)"
Posted by dwells on "The world never showed her" by Dethuntillite
- "beautiful..."small incarnations from a face with smiling lips" that was...a breath-taking line, welcome to dark poetry "
Posted by iceshot11 on "Dying Stars" by Dethuntillite
- "Your pieces seem to flow very clinically...almost removed from the emotions...possessing a voyeuristic feel. I can relate to that so closely. I hope you'll stick around."
Posted by Amaryllis on "Dying Stars" by Dethuntillite