An Impossible Duplication

By Dethuntillite


Movement with repetition continuing
Ways of losing a passionate life
An ugly world only these eyes see
Changes occurring with foolish expectations

Gray mind caught in a hopeful disturbance
Worlds known for throwing beauty to the side
Distances so far as to never be reeled back
A one-sided scope forever destined to view

Still standing on this bleeding heart
Pages of words to explain a paper soul
Redundant ventures for expressing a feeling
Ink dripping lines to the outside faces

Pulling my heart out to show you the colors
Towering walls never meant to be scaled
This romanticism surviving with every drop
The impossible duplication of feelings between two

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Copyright 2011 Dethuntillite
Published on Wednesday, October 12, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Jonas Robinson On Tuesday, October 15, 2019, Jonas Robinson (848)By person wrote:

    Good stuff. I enjoyed this because of its unique rhythm and meter. Thank you for sharing. :)

  • terris crimson On Wednesday, October 12, 2011, terris crimson (167)By person wrote:

    this has excellent form, it is very nice. welcome by the way.

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