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"I read this, over and over, and I see myself and I see you. I see a mirror and I see us. If that makes any sense at all, it's just the way it happens. after all, life is nothing but a rollercoaster. when we're not upside down on one side, we'll be backwards on the other. I love it. both of you. -mars"
Posted by Mars on "Bright Overalls" by SilentStalker

"isn't that the truth... good thing you didn't puke on the way down... lol... nice roller coaster tie-in... reminded me of the older woman and the man half her age... great piece of writing... thanks for sharing "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Bright Overalls" by SilentStalker

"did no one take the time to read the highlighted letters??? i loved the write and i loved the reference back to the first piece. like an answer to the quetion. even though the answer does not satisfy. which is ironic, as the first pieces theme was such as that. i loved this"
Posted by Poe Etiquette on "Just Another Reason to Crawl Under the Blanket and Cry" by SilentStalker

"Was great Darun. And thank you kinkyfrog for favoring it, so I found it. "
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "The Frog" by SilentStalker

"Wow...Emotion filled...and I felt it. Thank you."
Posted by ColorMeToxic on "For A Friend(First Tear)" by SilentStalker

"Brutally refreshing to see the other side of it...thanks a million...need just this sort of bump...*bows deeply*"
Posted by DarkDruidess on "For A Friend(First Tear)" by SilentStalker

"It was wonderfully tender. Beautiful write."
Posted by Unknown on "Hidden Love" by SilentStalker

"I hate to tell you this Marcus...but..at the risk of another facepalm...I think you're gonna go broke...our legs don't regrow..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "The Frog" by SilentStalker

"...and rip the tail off their spawn and make it a delicacy."
Posted by elisa on "The Frog" by SilentStalker

"I don't comment much, but just thought this was a great idea for a frog farm. Where you would pull only one leg off... harvest them. Let them regrow, then pull the other leg off... repeat repeat and reap in the money... maybe. Just a thought."
Posted by Unknown on "The Frog" by SilentStalker

"very psychologically inspiring. made me muse"
Posted by Poe Etiquette on "Nightmare" by SilentStalker

"there is something so eerie about the words be still my love. still like it though :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Villanelle -- The Price of Infidelity" by SilentStalker

"Really good lyrics and know how you feel"
Posted by Unknown on "And I Love You (Third Tear)" by SilentStalker

"Nice piece....I also like the way the ending ties it together....*bows*"
Posted by DarkDruidess on "Escape the Pain (repost from DP archives)" by SilentStalker

"hahahahahahaha!! i lost my appetite for rice. thank you!"
Posted by Grey Lies on "I Just Wanna Muff Dive Baby" by SilentStalker

"its not bad, its just not a CHAMPION! youve got a champion in there, i dunno if you just had an off day or if you were pandering to your fans, but its a 4/10 on the badassometer, but props on the appropriate structure and all that. its clean and consistent. just kind of, yawn stab slicey whatever time"
Posted by Unknown on "Villanelle -- The Price of Infidelity" by SilentStalker

"I read it a few times and tried to shake my bias of such heavily structured work, i dont like villanelles. I'm really upset you won the contest considering this is really run of the mill "you're getting stabbed" poetry. I feel if the poem is doomed to be built on such a rigid platform you should have opted for a more cryptic style. saying "the blade" is SOO played out. you dont have to really spell it out that much, it could have been heaps more violent if it didnt have that kind of obvious descriptor shit. its the kind of thing you find in a sad kids notebook. I'd have dug it if you were getting off more on their struggle and death rather than telling them theyre about to die and how comes. "
Posted by Unknown on "Villanelle -- The Price of Infidelity" by SilentStalker

"I loved this, awesome job portraying the horror... Innocent at first, horrific at the end. I applaud you."
Posted by Unknown on "The Ice Cream Man" by SilentStalker

"No surprise you won, when I first read it I could tell it was gold. You took the style, and Stalkerized it, congrats."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Villanelle -- The Price of Infidelity" by SilentStalker

"well deserved win :) i definitely have a new found respect for structure and rhyme. "
Posted by Unknown on "Villanelle -- The Price of Infidelity" by SilentStalker

"wicked write, man.. I like the pause for reflection..... the price must be paid... kudos *bows*"
Posted by Unknown on "Villanelle -- The Price of Infidelity" by SilentStalker

"Bravo... a masterpiece of emotion... this is really good my friend love the sorrow filled ending... thank-you"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "My Broken China Doll" by SilentStalker

"Very beautiful lyrics written from the heart."
Posted by tindomerel on "And I Love You (Third Tear)" by SilentStalker

"Heartfelt Write, Sir. Faint Reminders Of Loved Ones Long Gone."
Posted by Chaos God on "Buried" by SilentStalker

"This piece came out as a purr when I read it. You have managed to make impending death seductive and intimate. I can almost taste it. As far as I'm concerned, this piece is pure brilliance."
Posted by Amaryllis on "Villanelle -- The Price of Infidelity" by SilentStalker

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