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- ""My eyes now looking to the sky
I've silently chosen to die" Im not sure why but these two lines made me stutter. Something about them seem different than the rest. I definitely appreciate this as an example for repitition. "
Posted by Dei on "Falling away" by SilentStalker
- "Wow, this was great. The repetition was so well done. I love how each of the repeated lines slowly changed and evolved, finally culminating in the person's end."
Posted by MikoAmaya on "Falling away" by SilentStalker
- "I liked this one since I like to write love poems myself from time to time. But what I liked the most was iambic heptameter. I must admit that sometimes I don't have a good feeling for stresses. For me, this poem was also very instructive :]"
Posted by Flat on "What I Love About You" by SilentStalker
- "The way that it flows is rather beautiful. Smooth and swift. I hope that I never meet what's woken."
Posted by Aleator on "It Wakes" by SilentStalker
- "You have indeed captured that rare moment of male paralysis by analysis, when almost any "she" has that certain look akin to Medusa - nothing ventured..."
Posted by dwells on "The Dreamer" by SilentStalker
- "Of course Karen takes the good comment, all I can say now is that anapestic hexameter really lends well to the subject matter, its flow is actually pretty appealing to the eyes. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "The Dreamer" by SilentStalker
- "This was so much more than i expected. Im glad you were the one to take up my challenge. You did not let me down. Thank you."
Posted by Dei on "The Dreamer" by SilentStalker
- "well the meter is spot on as well as the rhyme ( internal and end ) ... but you already knew that ;) ... the rhythm of anapestic meter gives it the feel of the words coming out in an easy rush , perfect for such an open ended , enigmatic confession ... "
Posted by kinkifrog on "The Dreamer" by SilentStalker
- "oh wow. i concider this a 10 from me. this is utterly beautiful. i wanna fave this dammit. only if i had room. made me tear up a bit at the end.. honestly i don't know what to say.. i'm in awe... thanks :) "
Posted by Star on "The Dreamer" by SilentStalker
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