Comments by All Members
- "Wow! Love it, thank you for posting. There's such a strong essence of loneliness and an undercurrent sense of longing here. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it and your metaphors are spot on."
Posted by Unknown on "Maiden of the Stars" by alesana
- "Latin? Well, I recognise Latin words here, as well as Spanish and Italian. Yet, I was not completely sure. :-)"
Posted by Unknown on "Amo Te" by alesana
- "I liked the inverted syntax in 'for wide are thrown...' and the simplicity of the refrain... with minor changes... it may bring more emphasis to that last line... nicely packaged... by design. thanks."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Facilis Descensus Averno" by alesana
- "alesana what a beautiful poem. i sensed a touch of darkness in this and i thought this poem was just amazing. wow!"
Posted by haunted on "Fractals" by alesana
- "Utterly stunning. Awe-inspiring piece. Flowed so elegantly and had a sense of love perhaps lingering? "
Posted by Symbol on "Fractals" by alesana
- "To use all my energies to develop myself, to expand my heart out to others, to achieve enlightenment for the benefit of all beings....."
Posted by Unknown on "Character Sketch" by alesana
- "he couldn't be alone,imprisoned in his pain,yeah you did right,when you opened the window,welldone"
Posted by Unknown on "Flyaway Portrait" by alesana
- "Think you might like "Sundays and Hayrides" that I posted a few days ago, from a memory when I was about your age, but without the darker ending, cheers A.
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Posted by dwells on "Like Clinging to Shale" by alesana
- "The empty house across the way with something buried underneath the rose bush. Sounds like a house of many memories, nicely done, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "And So I Live Again" by alesana
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