Comments by All Members
- "I was waiting for something clever to happen at the end of this piece but it never happened. Feels unfinished for some reason..almost like you forced the ending."
Posted by Twilight on "Death The Silhouette" by Invisibledarkness
- "I love it. deep, emotionally crippling, and perfect in expressionalism. I have to hand it to you you sure know how to grab onto the strings of peoples heart and give it a yank. well done and welcome.^^"
Posted by terris crimson on "Words for the Broken Girl" by Invisibledarkness
- "This is very sweet , the pain never leaves , i lost my baby and his father last year .. every breath is a struggle .. bless you .. hope you to always find peace "
Posted by Corinthian on "See You Soon" by Invisibledarkness
- "RIP to him... My respects... The police shot my brother in front of his kids a few weeks ago... I can't even write about it cause i have no words yet... Sorry for your loss..."
Posted by Devilish on "See You Soon" by Invisibledarkness
- "words of truth. people need to help each other out when we're in need, who do we turn to when things get touch- what shoulder do we have to lean on. when we're self destructive, do they just turn away? maybe there are better people out there."
Posted by Mona on "Words for the Broken Girl" by Invisibledarkness
- "damn .. double damn. that was f***ing amazing! never particularly liked poems like this, but this was beautiful. you've changed my outlook on this genre. thank you!"
Posted by Unknown on "Light or Dark" by Invisibledarkness
- "Mark its a great poem. i'm sorry you had the daydream and i'm sorry i couldnt comfort you....im not good at that but i love you and i can promis you that if you were crying i would notice"
Posted by Unknown on "The daydream" by Invisibledarkness
