The daydream

By Invisibledarkness

Why when i closed my eyes,
Why were you in a coffin?
Why was I alone in a crowd?
Why did no one care about me?
My best friend lie motionless,
And no one notices me crying.
I don't know why this image came to be,
But why, why, why,
was I alone?
My best friend gone,
And no one even saw me.
Tears flowing like a river from my eyes,
My eyes which hav a sensation of fire.
A vivid daydream, or something more,
You lost your little brother.
Why did i have a vision of losing someone,
Someone i consider brother?
It doesn't make since,
But it was pain,
Broken-hearted pain...
It was only a daydream,
And that's the only comfort i can find.
No more thought of this,
Only time can show me what will happen from here.

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Copyright 2011 Invisibledarkness
Published on Monday, August 1, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Mark its a great poem. i'm sorry you had the daydream and i'm sorry i couldnt comfort you....im not good at that but i love you and i can promis you that if you were crying i would notice

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