I'm Still Alive

By Invisibledarkness

I'm  alive...
Oh how your efforts fail.
The efforts you've used to try and break my heart,
And to weaken my soul.
You draw your strength from my  pain,
And in return all I did was love.
I put my trust in you,
All you did was make me unable to trust...
So thank you!
Thank you for everything you did!
You ruined parts of me that can't be replaced...
All cuz I was a pawn in your little fucking game,
No more will I mourn,
Cuz I stand strong.
I'm still alive...
I live with a faint a heart beat,
And a broken soul,
But I'm still here.
Despite your many efforts,
I'm still here...
So throw your sticks and stones,
But you can't break what's already been broken,
From here I can only be repaired.
So when I fix my broken heart,
And strengthen my soul...
You'll finally see,
That despite everything...
I'm still alive...

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Copyright 2011 Invisibledarkness
Published on Friday, August 26, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Being alive and living are two very different subjects. I sincerely hope you can try again, even if you feel frightened and foolish. Write on.

  • A former member wrote: Rock on Marky!!! great words once again I love you big guy :)

  • Devilish On Saturday, August 27, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    That's why i say Fuck love in its ass.... Never give your heart, people don't know what to do with it... So you always be the master of your domain so if you feel the need to play nasty with your neibor.... Do it... Then take it back home for to clean it up....... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: i agree wiht you but this is a great poem:) Scholar

  • dwells On Friday, August 26, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Move on and don't look back (easier said than done).

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