Comments by All Members
- "Bfp, Cat, KB, and LB to top it all off with a cherry on top! Glad you found something of value here as we are diminished by those who would make us comply (or else). Cheer all and so glad to see Labella Blue too! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Peace by Pieces (villanellish)" by dwells
- "“On bloody stumps; no weapon now defends†you always weave such clever lines Dan. Every time I read something of yours I immediately re-read it. Just that good. Well done."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Peace by Pieces (villanellish)" by dwells
- "Amazing word play here, the once where friends and not being able to make amends; this is a real thing no matter what walk of life you come from, there will always be someone(s) in life that push a boundary to far. Thank you Dan this really made me think and I loved that you used Babel in this!! ~*Cat*~"
Posted by Cattarax on "Peace by Pieces (villanellish)" by dwells
- "The library at Aleandria and The twisted art of Hieronymous Bosch - love all the references in your comment my friend! - Cheer, Dan"
Posted by dwells on "The Charade (villanellish)" by dwells
- "The last stanza is a powerful blow. Bold, solid piece "
Posted by sheff on "Snipped" by dwells
- "I'm lost, where is Bruce Campbell in this? I think he's the one who would protest. If you think about it he's a pretty good representation of being drafted in the something unfairly. And his chainsaw arm? The righteous hope & will to fight the oppression of the government through sacrifice!!!"
Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "The Burning - Army of the Dead" by dwells
- "You know there were three thousand year old ancient-Sumerian Sanskrit etched stone tablets that ISIS destroyed. The library of London refused to accept them as truth. Even that old, they discussed genetic manipulation of DNA to create the perfect subservient slave race, humans. Pretty interesting, wether religious or ancient ufologist(scientist); the coin can be seen from both sides for both factions for zealousy & ridiculousness. Thank you for this brother. Also, there is an exact definical differentiation between Alien & extraterrestrial. An aliens genome is completely unique to our genetic makeup & structure. An extraterrestrial is alien DNA mixed with human genetics. I'm done now."
Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "The X.tra Terrestrial Genome" by dwells
- "Good ol' King Louie 16'th & Marie Antoinette seem to be the primary provocators in this to me. Let them eat cake! But it turns green & moist after a while; because well, a sweet-tooth only goes so far. Kudos!"
Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "Agent Provocateur" by dwells
- "And while the workers do their job, they never think of heir; for truth be told our precious queen just sits around on welfare! Ha! I liked this brother."
Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "Big Sister" by dwells
- "That's odd, I frequently ponder how everything that has evolved has led us to where we are now. How the predecessors; almost insequential & unimportant or just a memory that never existed to the forced machine & ways of where everything is going and how it should be. Wondering if people even stopped to pay homage to the forefathers that led us here. Very touching to me personally. Great work, Dan."
Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "Fait Accompli" by dwells
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I think I observed the subtlety within this poem. The leeches and the ticks, both competing for ample life force. Eternal conflict much as the Nephilim between Angels & Demons; both representations of forces inside yourself competing to either write or stifle that writing. Maybe? Idk, just what occurred in my head. The message here regardless is very truth, thanks."
Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "The Writes of Spring (villanelle)" by dwells
- "So exactly what is the wisdom of the youth? And the only interesting dichotomy that I see within this tome, is that you question where you went wrong. While this piece has hilarity, could it not be possible that the journey to seek the wisdom; much as the quest for the Holy Grail, was indeed the wrong turn of time invested in that life? Just mixed nuts for thought my friend! Loved it!"
Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "Wisdom of the Youth (villanelle)" by dwells
- "History, truth, nor fate are with us or against us. We left the world machine go rogue in order to stare at the little box and giggle. It takes more than two minutes to see what happened in the world each day. Ignorance is it's own reward. We've burnt the "Library of Alexandria" in our time by corrupting the data in it. The truth must be worked for. Bosch had to veil his painting's meaning and now we all must mind our tone. Dwell on. "
Posted by bpathos on "The Charade (villanellish)" by dwells
- "Many thanks for your insightful comment Dh and likewise to friends KB, JR, BP, and Miss Nat. Some things never change; except the history we've forgotten. Cheers all! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "The Charade (villanellish)" by dwells
- "Perfect description of the history of society, the rich getter rich the poor get poorer, politician's start a war send in 18 year olds to fight/dies for resources and everyone puts on their rosey colored glasses"
Posted by Divine hell on "The Charade (villanellish)" by dwells
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