Comments by All Members
- "Sweet! And I see you did a different structure. You're a very experimental writer but it always works out. "
Posted by 10 Forty Three on "Exist" by maliceman
- "Outstanding presentation. To say nothing about how well you have expressed the subject matter.--Draven."
Posted by Unknown on "Exist" by maliceman
- "actually a lot of my writing is older, this one and fake are my newest ones. the rest were mostly written in my junior and senior years of HS"
Posted by maliceman on "Pins And Needles" by maliceman
- "i am usually obsessed with rhyme. i used to have to train myself not to rhyme. i am a perfectionist, and i enjoy the beauty of a perfect sounding poem. i am also a fan of repetition. i like to express my point until u can hardly stand it anymore.."
Posted by maliceman on "Dream Of Me" by maliceman
- "a lot of my poetry i write as songs, i someday hope to be a vocalist"
Posted by maliceman on "Fake" by maliceman
- "I'm not fond of rhyme unless it's used lyrically, but you kept me reading, which is a high compliment from me, horrible as it may sound.... the "paint the sky with polka dots..." line was fantastic and felt on a personal level... well thought out write here. Though there's one misspelling "..if *you're* not afraid to feel" ~b"
Posted by blue on "Dream Of Me" by maliceman
- "sweet rhyme...'paint the sky with polka dots if you dislike the blue'...a pretty dream...I like 'Have a seat upon a cloud' ... has a 'monkey magic' feel about it..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Dream Of Me" by maliceman
- "Alyssa has you under her spell...you've written confusion very well...and I agree with Nat...could be a song... :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Fake" by maliceman
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