Forbidden

By maliceman

Smitten is forbidden when i'm smitten for you
Giving that i'm forbidden, i'm forbidden from you
And yes, you're forbidden if you're smitten for me too
Living while forbidden while i'm living for you
And i'm forbidden from living, a life living with you
What's the point of living if i am not living with you?
So i am forbidden from living a life worth being forbidden for you
I'd rather be forbidden than to never love you...

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Copyright 2011 maliceman
Published on Wednesday, February 16, 2011.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I love it

  • deathndismay On Sunday, December 2, 2012, deathndismay (93)By person wrote:

    intricate like a web of awesome. Well done..

  • Ladyhawke On Monday, August 29, 2011, Ladyhawke (394)By person wrote:

    Hmmm, i don't know how i managed to miss this before. I have a poem titled the same thing (oops), but yours is much nicer. I love the way you've woven the words together. Beautiful. Truly.

  • 10 Forty Three On Wednesday, February 16, 2011, 10 Forty Three (593)By person wrote:

    Dude. Wow. This put a smile on my face even if it's sad. I just really liked the flow of this one. :)

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