Burn

By maliceman

If I ask you to die
Will you comply?
I'm sick of your lying
I'm suffering inside

Someone must have taken your photo
Because your soul has been stolen
You are empty and hollow
You're heart is rigid and broken

Now you are rotting with malice
You are fueled by vendetta
A terrible vindication
That seems to last forever

You knew that I loved you
You knew that I cared
You knew that I wanted
To always be there

No matter what I say
My love is eternal
I'll wait in the shadows
Beyond your inferno
And if the fire dies down
I will caress you again
And if it doesn't
I'll wait 'til the end

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Copyright 2011 maliceman
Published on Thursday, February 17, 2011.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • 10 Forty Three On Friday, February 18, 2011, 10 Forty Three (543)By person wrote:

    Nice one. I don't usually wait for people myself but whatever works for you man.

  • A former member wrote: I like this... Deep. I applaud this piece.

  • DarkDruidess On Thursday, February 17, 2011, DarkDruidess (313)By person wrote:

    Beautiful blend of feeling...nice.

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