Fallen (Angel?)

By maliceman

I fell and broke my heart
I never thought I'd fall so hard
And it's your fault because you tripped me
When you said that you missed me
Love had never felt so good
I felt everything that i thought i should
You called me your baby
Then you turned around and played me
My heart didn't just break, it shattered
You were all that mattered
Now i walk these lonesome streets, gazing at the ground
I never see the sky, or anyone around
My skin begins to pale, and my feelings fade away
Love is a word I wish i had never learned to say

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Copyright 2011 maliceman
Published on Wednesday, February 16, 2011.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Love this! Its beautiful and I can really relate to it. Your words speak to me. ;)

  • Razor-kissed-wrists On Friday, March 18, 2011, Razor-kissed-wrists (13)By person wrote:

    I really like this one

  • 10 Forty Three On Wednesday, February 16, 2011, 10 Forty Three (543)By person wrote:

    Yet another great piece. Well done. And really good ending.

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