Eclipse

By maliceman

Eternal eclipse,
darkness reigns.
No longer exists,
the sun that pains.
Released, we're free,
at night we roam.
The place we left,
now an empty tomb.
We rule the world,
mortals beware.
At every turn,
we're everywhere.
Crimson drips from
our wicked smiles.

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Published on Monday, February 7, 2011. Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Eclipse"

On Sunday, December 2, 2012, deathndismay (92) wrote:

So few words to portray such a picture. Very nice....
A former member wrote: Woah, cool! :D
On Friday, September 9, 2011, Ladyhawke (392) wrote:

The title drew me in, and I love the way it intertwines with the content of the poem, but just on the fringes. Just enough to get your curoisity up, but doesn't give away the secret it holds. Titles matter. And you, my friend, have done very well;)
A former member wrote: By far my favorite.
A former member wrote: This makes me feel... beastly =) LOVE IT.
On Saturday, February 12, 2011, lupus tenebrae (860) wrote:

The creatures of the night, ever watching shadow stalkers. I too loved the imagery, write on.
On Friday, February 11, 2011, Poe Etiquette (124) wrote:

i love the intricate imagery and solid structure. very good write
On Friday, February 11, 2011, 10 Forty Three (543) wrote:

Oooh this was nice. Well done!