Dream Of Me
By maliceman
Have a seat upon a cloud
and make yourself at home.
You are now
inside my dreams
you will never be alone.
Where anything can
happen
if you only make it real.
Plunge with me into the river
if you're not afraid to feel.
Let me share my dreams with you
until you find your own.
I'll take you there if you believe,
You will never be alone.
Pick the flowers if you like,
and
plant a seed or two.
Paint the sky with polka dots
if you dislike
the blue.
When your world is filled with rain
and the sun
is
hiding from sight,
let my dreams caress your mind
and help you
through the night.
There's a place inside my dreams
if you care
to roam.
So have a seat upon a cloud,
you will never be alone...
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Copyright 2011 maliceman
Author's Note:
Written in collaboration with Anna FelicioneComments on "Dream Of Me"
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On Thursday, November 24, 2011, Adam
(242) wrote:
For a darkpoetry place I rarely say "This is beautiful" and mean beautiful by its customary definition... At this time I do. The work well well written and very positive. Great job! -Adam
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A former member wrote:
Ok, now this one is my favorite. This one brought me close to tears for some odd reason. It hit close to home in a way. Loved it.
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On Wednesday, February 16, 2011, 10 Forty Three
(543) wrote:
Awesome. I definitely liked this one. Well done!
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On Tuesday, February 15, 2011, blue
(1409) wrote:
I'm not fond of rhyme unless it's used lyrically, but you kept me reading, which is a high compliment from me, horrible as it may sound.... the "paint the sky with polka dots..." line was fantastic and felt on a personal level... well thought out write here. Though there's one misspelling "..if *you're* not afraid to feel" ~b
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On Tuesday, February 15, 2011, maliceman
(32) wrote:
i am usually obsessed with rhyme. i used to have to train myself not to rhyme. i am a perfectionist, and i enjoy the beauty of a perfect sounding poem. i am also a fan of repetition. i like to express my point until u can hardly stand it anymore..
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On Tuesday, February 15, 2011, Corinthian
(306) wrote:
This is very very pretty , makes me think of a magic carpet ride ...