Exist

By maliceman

Blue eyes
        Black  clothes
Who am I?
                 No one knows
They think they do
                              And they pretend
That they care
                                         And are my friends
So many knives
                                         Are in my back
Trusting others
                               Something i lack
Hide in shadows
                    Never found
Hear no evil
       Hear no sound

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Copyright 2011 maliceman
Published on Thursday, February 17, 2011.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • 10 Forty Three On Thursday, February 17, 2011, 10 Forty Three (543)By person wrote:

    Sweet! And I see you did a different structure. You're a very experimental writer but it always works out.

  • A former member wrote: Outstanding presentation. To say nothing about how well you have expressed the subject matter.--Draven.

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