A Lie Before A Truth

By maliceman

You know that i can't be your superman
But i will save you nonetheless
You may or may not have been loved before
But i will love you the best

I know that you can't be my Wonderwoman
But a wonder is what you are
Nothing can stop us now
Our love has brought us so far

I may not be psychic
But i can see us lasting forever
Life is not a sharpened blade
Our love it cannot sever

This is not a dog-eat-dog world
I think we'll have the salad
This moment is not a symphony
but our love is like a ballad

Hatred is not a monkeywrench
It cannot destroy our love
No matter what is thrown at us
it will never be enough

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I will never be your superman
You are such an ugly mess
Ok, so i loved you,
That i must confess

You could never be my Wonderwoman
"Wonder" is what you're not
Nothing can stop my hate now
I guess you're not what i thought

I know I'm not psychic
But i always know when you're lying
Life is a very sharp blade
It will be there when your dying

In this dog-eat-dog world
You stabbed me in the back
I never wanna see you again
Compassion is what i lack

Hate, the answer to all questons
You were never in love with me
I hope you choke on your lies
Because the truth has set me free (of you)

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Copyright 2011 maliceman
Published on Monday, February 7, 2011.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

another experiment.. also its two poems put together
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  • Jonas Robinson On Friday, February 15, 2019, Jonas Robinson (848)By person wrote:

    Catchy, beautiful and witty. :)

  • Killerdemonchick On Tuesday, October 30, 2012, Killerdemonchick (53)By person wrote:

    I really like this... I like the bottom the best too so different but so much the same as the top.

  • A former member wrote: Love these poems! I love most of all your work.... its so great! Thanks for sharing! :)

  • A former member wrote: The beginning brought a frown to my face, but the end made me giddy with joy. I think that says something about my character. (Obviously, I like the bottom the best :)

  • 10 Forty Three On Friday, February 11, 2011, 10 Forty Three (543)By person wrote:

    Both poems were amazing! This one might be my favorite so far. "I may not be psychic, but I can see us lasting forever." I really like that line especially. You should do another double poem.

  • maliceman On Friday, February 11, 2011, maliceman (32)By person wrote:

    thanks man. the first poem was when i was with a girl. the second was the day after the breakup.

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