A Lie Before A Truth
By maliceman
You know that i can't be your superman
But i will save you nonetheless
You may or may not have been loved before
But i will love you the
best
I know that you can't be my Wonderwoman
But a wonder
is what you are
Nothing can stop us now
Our love has brought
us so far
I may not be psychic
But i can see us lasting
forever
Life is not a sharpened blade
Our love it cannot sever
This is not a dog-eat-dog world
I think we'll have the salad
This moment is not a symphony
but our love is like a ballad
Hatred is not a monkeywrench
It cannot destroy our love
No
matter what is thrown at us
it will never be enough
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I will never be your superman
You are such an ugly mess
Ok, so i loved you,
That i must confess
You could never
be my Wonderwoman
"Wonder" is what you're not
Nothing can stop
my hate now
I guess you're not what i thought
I know I'm
not psychic
But i always know when you're lying
Life is a very
sharp blade
It will be there when your dying
In this dog-eat-dog
world
You stabbed me in the back
I never wanna see you again
Compassion is what i lack
Hate, the answer to all questons
You were never in love with me
I hope you choke on your lies
Because the truth has set me free (of you)
Author's Note:
another experiment.. also its two poems put togetherComments on "A Lie Before A Truth"
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On Friday, February 15, 2019, Jonas Robinson
(848) wrote:
Catchy, beautiful and witty. :)
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On Tuesday, October 30, 2012, Killerdemonchick
(53) wrote:
I really like this... I like the bottom the best too so different but so much the same as the top.
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A former member wrote:
Love these poems! I love most of all your work.... its so great! Thanks for sharing! :)
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A former member wrote:
The beginning brought a frown to my face, but the end made me giddy with joy. I think that says something about my character. (Obviously, I like the bottom the best :)
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On Friday, February 11, 2011, 10 Forty Three
(543) wrote:
Both poems were amazing! This one might be my favorite so far. "I may not be psychic, but I can see us lasting forever." I really like that line especially. You should do another double poem.
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On Friday, February 11, 2011, maliceman
(32) wrote:
thanks man. the first poem was when i was with a girl. the second was the day after the breakup.