Comments by All Members
- "Truly amazing. My favourite "verse" if you want to call it that was "I want to feel your
drug on me
breakin' through my system
and makin' each inch
your home " I loved the whole thing. It was gorgeous---Alyssa"
Posted by Unknown on "Dirty Looks & Adrenaline" by maddin foxxxy
- "I have to agree with Old Soul. The beginning and ending felt very natural and comforting. The "I carry the skies" stanza definately held a lot of weight (no pun intended)."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Entre Brazos" by maddin foxxxy
- "so many sentiments you have shared here....very sweet and honest piece...and certainly the 'i hold the skies' stanza is brilliant...wonderful as always...-l-"
Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "Entre Brazos" by maddin foxxxy
- "'Between Arms' / 'Every feeling
is a shadow
undiscovered
and recovered
form craShING IN
with me now ' entre nous... beautiful, this poem; the feelings... breathing soulful passions..."
Posted by Unknown on "Entre Brazos" by maddin foxxxy
- "outstanding. this is...it just flows like liquid..it makes me want to go outside and just stare into the starry skies. thanks"
Posted by Unknown on "Entre Brazos" by maddin foxxxy
- "Beautiful and intimate, I especially loved the opening lines. So sad and it captures you. Awesome write. ~L"
Posted by Lynaes on "Entre Brazos" by maddin foxxxy
- ":) my fav part was the verse starting with, 'I carry the skies'. The ending was spectacular. This poem embraced me. You are amazing. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Entre Brazos" by maddin foxxxy
- ""I remembered to remember ..
You've remembered
to forget " i dont think anything i saw will be enough..so i will just tell you, i deeply enjoyed this. ~Drea~
"
Posted by Drea on "Yellow Post It" by maddin foxxxy
- "you have such away with emotions. you mold the words to convey what you want. ...and you do it amazingly well. I have always been in awe of your talent. This work is like a whisper...~Drea~"
Posted by Drea on "Nudity of Expression" by maddin foxxxy
- "your writings are so timeless, this contains a wisdom that distance has produced......you have done so very well here...............urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "Yellow Post It" by maddin foxxxy
- "I think this is wonderful. The flow is sublime. It left me with a feeling of sad serenity. I particularly like the stanza "And you smiled
like a child
But cursed
like a man"...for a reason I can't explain this really got to me. thank you. FF"
Posted by flying_fox on "Framed form Of you" by maddin foxxxy
- "'The years they all
accumulate
in the mishaps
that crash
in fate' Lovely analogy expressed in music of your soul w/ splendid words & subtle arppeggiated aliterations..."
Posted by Unknown on "Here's My Guitar" by maddin foxxxy
- "Its seems with some of your stuff I relate to the other end of the spectrum. So, your viewpoint brings much understanding. *unties the string around your finger* Much easier on the heart. Love it, hun :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Yellow Post It" by maddin foxxxy
- "This is a really fantastic write . . such an incredible way to express what is inside . . in an honest and touching way, that whispers to the very core in all of us. Wonderful job."
Posted by cre on "Nudity of Expression" by maddin foxxxy
- "beautiful in its quaundry...... this work is well in its truth, but you have always portrayed that well in your work....there are many within the one.....well done my friend...........urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "Nudity of Expression" by maddin foxxxy
- "This is one of the better poems that I have seen in a while; on DP or anywhere else. It is stark in its honest introspection and gentle in its verdict. It is heartfelt while being thought provoking. It is amazing and beautiful."
Posted by Stranger on "Nudity of Expression" by maddin foxxxy
- "I love how you bring the fantasy to a real-life setting and still hold its magic. Loving something you've never had... I know I've been able to relate to that. Nice work beautiful."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Claro de Luna" by maddin foxxxy
- "The opening says it all. This may be short, but you managed to capture the simplicity AND depth behind this emotion in a perfect manner. I'm glad I stumbled upon it!"
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Paisage" by maddin foxxxy
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