A Place To Stand

By maddin foxxxy

I find you in the place i left,
the place of no return
where you were kept
and your fire always burn.
The place i do recall,
your face is blurry as hell
where i had thrown my all
in a hole in which i fell.
Can you find yourself in here?
Could you differ from the rest?
My shoulders still carry your fears...
My will still believes i did my best.
Your name is no one
Your existance is fading fast
Somehow an ending has begun
since such a distant past.
I wish to wish nothing
except to have wind in between my hands,
and for you to someday bring
a place where i can stand.

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Published on Thursday, December 5, 2002. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on "A Place To Stand"

On Thursday, October 6, 2016, 10 Forty Three (593) wrote:

Powerful and beautiful. Always a great combination. Well done. - 10:43
A former member wrote: you put a lot of emotion in this one i like it
A former member wrote: good write..its so...openy, i cant describe...btw.is ur last name madden??udont have to answer but jst curious ok later...~~drunk trag guy
On Thursday, June 10, 2004, frost bite (43) wrote:

I love the emotion put into each of your writes, 'Your name is no one Your existance is fading fast' i love it, just the right words in the midst of an already awesome write. *captain frost*
On Sunday, February 8, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (341) wrote:

your poetry seems so natural,beautiful and free...just like you are(reference to pic)...-l-
On Thursday, February 5, 2004, Angst Queen (370) wrote:

great write, i'm a little late in reading it, heh, but great none the less
A former member wrote: lossing love sucks when you've done the best you know to do. good write
On Monday, November 10, 2003, urbanhumility (1175) wrote:

a foward and gracious begining...your minds virtue is fair.......well spoken....urban
A former member wrote: Seems like a sad burden to bear. "My shoulders still carry your fears...." I really enjoyed this piece. ~Urban Shipwreck~
A former member wrote: I'm in love with "i wish to wish nothing"
On Saturday, May 24, 2003, CharlottesWeb (511) wrote:

A place to stand seems like such a simple want...absolutely abysmal...that being said...there is nothing left for me to say. ~DW~
A former member wrote: Very nicely written. I think its a beautiful piece of art.
On Monday, March 17, 2003, DoctorAsh (373) wrote:

let me agree with the others ,.. combind they're comments and you have mine
On Wednesday, March 12, 2003, cre (411) wrote:

I like this, great to read and full of thought. Good write.
On Tuesday, March 11, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (1703) wrote:

"to have wind in between my hands" - very intriguing notion! Ciao, T/S
On Thursday, February 6, 2003, Jonas (720) wrote:

nice cadence