Comments by All Members
- "Excellent conversational tone, catchy title whose premise instantly grabs and holds the reader. Anticipating with pleasure devouring more and more and MORE of your work. I'm glad you bothered."
Posted by Sidanne on "Why do I bother?" by Morgoth
- ""It's said the more your heart beats the shorter you live...
If so then I'll die young." - That is a great opening line. Great piece, man! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Is this?" by Morgoth
- "Sometimes I grow a beard. After a while I feel all scraggly and want to shave. And I do."
Posted by Unknown on "Ode to beards" by Morgoth
- "Yeah,, um... Not a fan of beards, but hey... To each their own, right... :D sexiness! I officially adopt you as my dp husband! No take backs (.) ;)"
Posted by soul_versing on "Ode to beards" by Morgoth
- ".bows head and sighs. I love you, my Corey Feldman replica. True words from a broken poet and expressive. .squeezes him tightly."
Posted by soul_versing on "You Never Knew" by Morgoth
- "the mask is never a way to show yourself to one you have feelings for... sounds like you are overcoming this illusion. Best of luck in this, if it isn't what you had hoped, remember you are not invisible but with the mask your close, because the true you cant be seen..."
Posted by Unknown on "Invisible" by Morgoth
- "The howl, is the call of their brotherhood ... a tactic of misdirection, the sound of overwhelming bloodlust... great write."
Posted by Unknown on "The Howl of a Brother" by Morgoth
- "Sometimes any feeling will do... knowing you are alive is sometimes so hard to see without an act of proof... the pain is felt throughout your words above... try to remember, there are more ways than one and if someone offers nothing but suffering, the value of them in your life may want to be second guessed..."
Posted by Unknown on "Razor Red Ribbons" by Morgoth
- "I really love how you wrote this poem. You have a way with structure and imagery. I am deeply amazed by your feelings that is poured into this. Beautiful write. *Lily*"
Posted by Unknown on "The shores of Styx" by Morgoth
- "I logged back in just to read and comment. I see past the personification and looked into its deep meaning. I adore you and just so you know... You are an amazingly structured individual. I mean all of this in a completely platonic way. I hope you find what you have been searching for. Bows-"
Posted by soul_versing on "The shores of Styx" by Morgoth
- "My mind drifted off to a pleasant place... I lost all train-of-thought to your amazing poem. I love it. Bows- "
Posted by soul_versing on "Gaia's Home" by Morgoth
- "You never give up because you have a soul. despite making yourself believe that you are better off alone; which of course, is not true! No one deserves to suffer, nor fall victim to isolation of their absolute self. From what I have read of you, you are an absolutely beautiful person... Inside-out. Tis, "truer than true." Dr. Seuss ;) lol. Now, I want some green eggs and ham. Bows-"
Posted by soul_versing on "Why do I bother?" by Morgoth
- "No matter how much a person may try to disguise themselves; only a matter of time, before their truer self resurfaces. Entertaining with much enjoyment. "
Posted by soul_versing on "Good to be home" by Morgoth
- "Reading this shifted me into my deepest of thoughts, the tucked away ones that you speak, (rather), write of. Goosebumps form from my neck to the tip of my spine. Beautiful, unraveling, disastrous thoughts, playing in my mind."
Posted by soul_versing on "Flash" by Morgoth
- "I'm about to graduate college soon, and I am on the fence about my emotions towards my future. I can relate. So... 3 years later and has your prospective changed much..? I believe it has of course because we are all susceptible to change. Bows-"
Posted by soul_versing on "What Will Happen?" by Morgoth
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