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Invisible
By Morgoth
Why don't you notice me?
You don't see, it's killing me.
You don't remember me, but I remember
you.
My love for you is... overwhelming.
It consumes me, I'm
losing my mind to you.
All you do is stand there and stare as my heart
divides.
I want to be yours,
Don't close the doors.
Please
let me inside,
Dont push me away...
I Love You!!
You
don't see me,
Am I invisible?
I need you in my life, the pain
makes me cry at night.
I hate all this strife...
Some say ignorance
is a bliss...
Maybe for you.
But it's hell for me.
I miss
you,
I need you,
Please take my hand...
I Love You!!
The time for acting is over.
I don't know what will happen,
but I can't keep this mask!
I'm taking it off, you have to see whats
under my mask.
It's me but what will you think?
I cannot know,
but I hope...
I hope you like my face...
Because...
I Love
You.
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Copyright 2010 Morgoth
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A former member wrote:
the mask is never a way to show yourself to one you have feelings for... sounds like you are overcoming this illusion. Best of luck in this, if it isn't what you had hoped, remember you are not invisible but with the mask your close, because the true you cant be seen...
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On Saturday, December 21, 2013, soul_versing
(882)
wrote:
Dammit... I cried. I felt every bit of this as it coursed through my veins. .sighs.
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A former member wrote:
very passionate. you obviously care very much for who you are writing this for. great write.....and whoever you're writing this for oughta be sacked! like in monty python!
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On Thursday, May 20, 2010, Ladyhawke
(394) wrote:
"You dont see, Its killing me"? Oh my god. This is so. . . there's no words to explain. I couldnt get all the way through without thinking of what happened to you. And something similar of what I went through. I only wish I could write like that. Rock for life man. Never give it up, ur too good!
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On Wednesday, May 19, 2010, musicalsuicide
(58) wrote:
wow this is great you really are amazing. You go morgoth!
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A former member wrote:
We all can relate to feeling invisible at times, it especially hurts when it's someone you love...good job
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On Friday, May 14, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
love and masks... so poetic, well done... nicely written, thanks
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