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"i always hated how "Ana" is used. personifying an evil, making it into a god. well written."
Posted by tallygrowsome on "Just let me" by Dreamzz

"I was tag surfing and found this... very cool... I enjoyed the theme... very good thanks... press your monster tag and check it out... MD"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Monster story" by Dreamzz

"Wow!! How very different .. I love it! I was curious when I seen your name.. Glad I read you.. Beautiful.. Hello there.."
Posted by Devilish on "Rotten Candy Heart" by Dreamzz

"This, Has touched me, how I do not know, But I am in love with this write."
Posted by Unknown on "A life of an artist" by Dreamzz

"The only word i can use to describe this is brutal. Very emotional write tho. Your heart speaks and lives thru words, as do all of ours."
Posted by Ladyhawke on "crowd" by Dreamzz

"Darkly humorous, full of emotion. Nice job!"
Posted by Unknown on "I'm not going to say it... Yet" by Dreamzz

"stunning portrayal of life...thank you for this piece"
Posted by Unknown on "Getting Gone" by Dreamzz

"damn, it seems that the same old tired lines are repeated throughout man's history, and we creatures of the heart always die because of them. well done."
Posted by natalie on "Lies." by Dreamzz

"neat lil piece here. although i don't really seethe title as befitting the poem itself."
Posted by natalie on "Forming a women." by Dreamzz

"Wow, that really hit me like a ton of bricks. You didn't have much structure to the poem itself but that is exactly what made this work amazing. I could really feel the intense emotions radiating from your words and I actually felt myself clenching my teeth in anger that no one was saving her. Great work"
Posted by mindsurfer on "Why can't you help?" by Dreamzz

"great poem. Sounds like you are a true friend. "
Posted by beautifullybroken on "Sideline movie watcher" by Dreamzz

"I have body dysphormic order and other health problems such as the involuntary urge to stab a person when they get on my nerves. I am terribly afraid to go to therapy alone and have been begging my boyfriend to go with me he always just laughs and calls me silly and says I am perfectly normal."
Posted by Dreamzz on "Help" by Dreamzz

"I can relate to this. I've struggled with an ED myself. if you ever need someone to talk to on a more personal level you can talk to me. "
Posted by beautifullybroken on "Beautiful" by Dreamzz

"The beauty of a person lies within inside the person, what's on the outside it's only defined by impulses that our eyes transmit to our brain, a nice piece of work but think about what I mentioned above."
Posted by Unknown on "Beautiful" by Dreamzz

"indeed..a message for help. I don't think you're weird..but then you'll say I dont know you.. but I wont see anyone weird..I've heard the word upon myself as well.and dont do unto others the same.. simple as that.so much hatred that can em bottle you .. you shouldnt me messed with. I can say how you could get that impulse to stab..if people whom I assume perhaps consider themselves friends or family ..pretend..ignore..and in the end really have a bad ideal of you inside.. I think this work was good..you got what you wanted say it very well.and formatted interesting too.right now at first glance I picture a jack hammer lol.."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Help" by Dreamzz

"oh.wow ..this made my bones shiver for a second..to eat these words,..starve yourself for the sake of being (told) you're "beautiful " by one person whom perhaps hasnt even notice whats happening..its sick..you're getting weak.I bet you are beautiful.no need to endure pain..it shouldnt be judged solely by the eyes of one man..affecting your own health.. and lies you say.. this wont go anywhere good..is it really worth it in the is the question that will present.good job"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Beautiful" by Dreamzz

"very cool, so well said... reminds me of the guy arrested for selling weight reducing pills... tape worms in jell-caps... no matter what you eat or how much, you will lose weight... thanks for sharing"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Just let me" by Dreamzz

"oh thanks a lot now i will have nightmare for atleast a month. :) But seriously nice write remind me of enter sandman by metallica :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Monster story" by Dreamzz

"there is always something better just around the corner... a fine piece on pain... thanks"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Why" by Dreamzz

""The pain can be managed"..aint that a bitch..Despise.those eyes"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Why" by Dreamzz

"Doesn't sound like a block to me... Nice"
Posted by Unknown on "The block" by Dreamzz

"This is just as inspiring as it is sad, write on dreamz you are amazing"
Posted by Unknown on "Untitled for a reason" by Dreamzz

"a precious piece - well done"
Posted by Riven Waker on "Rotten Candy Heart" by Dreamzz

"rib tickler for sure heh heh "
Posted by natalie on "Those three words" by Dreamzz

"um...I reckon there are peeps who would care if you weren't around anymore...and if there is no-one around o hear your lies...are you lying to yourself? just a thought? :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "What's the point" by Dreamzz

"hmmm...the point of writing...it's meant to be cathartic and I've read it :) ...dreaming is your subconscious...sorting out all the stimulus since you last slept...silent screams are inaudible anyway...the point of living is to 'experience' ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "What's the point" by Dreamzz

""Come on baby make it hurt so good ...." This piece does an excellent job exemplifying those words. awesome. --Draven."
Posted by Unknown on "Sex and regret." by Dreamzz

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