Never again...

By Dreamzz

Never again will the mockingbird sing
      or flap its once beautiful wings.

Nor will the children laugh and play
    like childhood will always stay.

The cherry blossoms will stop their bloom
                 all because i lost you.

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Copyright 2010 Dreamzz
Published on Sunday, March 14, 2010.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • lupus tenebrae On Thursday, March 18, 2010, lupus tenebrae (860)By person wrote:

    I got done reading this, and felt like I was shot right in the heart, if that doesn't sound too cliche, really sad write, that knocked the wind out of me, write on. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: awww :( i love it. so sad. Scholar

  • Dreamzz On Sunday, March 14, 2010, Dreamzz (19)By person wrote:

    Thanks, is it odd i love to hear the words sad and love in the same sentence.

  • Musik2MyEyes On Sunday, March 14, 2010, Musik2MyEyes (192)By person wrote:

    Awww this was really good. The shortness of it was perfect...left a cloak of sadness hanging at the door.

  • Dreamzz On Sunday, March 14, 2010, Dreamzz (19)By person wrote:

    That's one of the beauties of words

  • Rowan On Sunday, March 14, 2010, Rowan (197)By person wrote:

    Short and sweet. A powerful write for such a simple poem . Thank you. Keep writing. :)

  • Dreamzz On Sunday, March 14, 2010, Dreamzz (19)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much :)

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