Rotten Candy Heart

By Dreamzz

Die my sweet candy heart
though sugary sweet
thy also sickenly tart.

 

And though a tempting treat
for only I alone to eat.
My heart will not dare to lie.
 

For my hearts belongs to my cherry pie.
So now i ask thy rotten heart
to die and sugar over like a lemon tart.


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Copyright 2010 Dreamzz
Published on Sunday, March 14, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Devilish On Saturday, December 3, 2011, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    Wow!! How very different .. I love it! I was curious when I seen your name.. Glad I read you.. Beautiful.. Hello there.. Scholar

  • Riven Waker On Monday, July 26, 2010, Riven Waker (323)By person wrote:

    a precious piece - well done

  • musicalsuicide On Thursday, May 13, 2010, musicalsuicide (58)By person wrote:

    this is absolutely perfect

  • A former member wrote: This was a cute theme. Nice. =)

  • Musik2MyEyes On Sunday, March 14, 2010, Musik2MyEyes (193)By person wrote:

    Hmmm interesting subject matters. I felt the disdain you expressed. But for some reason I'm hungry now ;)

  • Rowan On Sunday, March 14, 2010, Rowan (202)By person wrote:

    Very interesting. I like the theme and the concept. It's very different.

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