Just let me

By Dreamzz

Just let me be.
Beautiful.


please                 
i need this
please
i want this
Ana save me
from the coat of warmth that surrounds me
im sick
so sick
but yet i feel myself getting thinner
i want it to happen
i learned to cope with the pain
stomach growling head spinning im getting thinner
pretty first then a poet
just let me be...




beautiful
so ana save me
and fly me away
to where i can be beautiful every single day
never overweight
like a model i can fly
Even if ana takes me where i can die

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Copyright 2010 Dreamzz
Published on Sunday, August 15, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

ana save me
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  • tallygrowsome On Sunday, May 5, 2013, tallygrowsome (9)By person wrote:

    i always hated how "Ana" is used. personifying an evil, making it into a god. well written.

  • Malcholm Dark On Sunday, August 15, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    very cool, so well said... reminds me of the guy arrested for selling weight reducing pills... tape worms in jell-caps... no matter what you eat or how much, you will lose weight... thanks for sharing

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