Somewhere over the rainbow
By Dreamzz
Somewhere over the rainbow
there is a girl crying on her knees.
Where bluebirds die.
And the dreams are crushed and left behind.
The girl is bleeding,dying,thinking.
Thinking, bleeding, dying, wondering
why she too was left behind
with the birds never meant to fly.
She knows this is where she will die
she is dying underneath the stars
being crushed by the heavy bars.
Why is it here she must die.
Bleeding, dying, thinking,
wondering why here we all must die.
This is hell I know all to well
she is stuck dying in her own special shell.
Die now! Her thoughts tell her
from who she is not sure.
The scars she has were self made,
but she never knew today was her last day.
Now she's dead she died in hell
something we all knew very well.
No one saved her no one tried
this is the reason that she died.
Author's Note:
I don't even know anymore...Comments on "Somewhere over the rainbow"
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On Sunday, April 4, 2010, Musik2MyEyes
(193) wrote:
This was a good piece...a little cryptic. Not as strong as some of your other work...like you were struggling with it. Maybe that was the point. Times of confusion do not come out with precise thoughts. I love the contrast in the title and the piece itself. Who knew the end of the rainbow was such a dark place?
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On Saturday, March 20, 2010, punk mc cool
(75) wrote:
this was really sad and deep....nice write bro :D
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A former member wrote:
when times get low i often think this is hell. i convince myself if i just make it through it, god will be waiting. have strength, give it time.
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On Saturday, March 20, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
That was a really dark write, I loved the horrifying images this gave me, thanks for such a beautifully gloomy write..