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- "To carry-on a bit further: when we lived in trees and caves, the night time was when the beasties were on the prowl. This put us at a disadvantage because of out poor night vision (not enough rods or cones I think). The burning question then was "where are the lions?" - just laughed at my typo = "loins?"."
Posted by dwells on "Children And Monsters In The Night" by Malcholm Dark
- "Reminiscent of "Little Orphan Annie" by James Whitcomb Riley - that was composed to scare the crap out of kids and it did give one the shivers I must admit. Something in our DNA that loves a good fright."
Posted by dwells on "Children And Monsters In The Night" by Malcholm Dark
- "Written by a real fisherman, or master-baiter, who can turn a fishing tale into an erotic adventure for the mind. Jolly good read."
Posted by dwells on "The Fishing (Ho)le" by Malcholm Dark
- "Think I'll join this website since I've found one poet who I believe could teach me a thing or two. I look forward to spending some time with your previous works. Most enjoyable!"
Posted by dwells on "Ride M'lady, Ride " by Malcholm Dark
- "I had a clear vision of this lady riding naked on bareback. this could be a cause of malady in her husband, haha. when I first read the title, I thought it said, ride, malady, ride, which could've made sense, in a way. enjoyed."
Posted by wraith on "Ride M'lady, Ride " by Malcholm Dark
- "Gives a new meaning to riding bareback, Lady Godiva, an all-encompassing free spirit. Hardening below eh? She really knew how to get a rise out of people. Nice to see one of your works again, write onward."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Ride M'lady, Ride " by Malcholm Dark
- "It was either the frying pan, or becoming a wall mount. The inevitable fate for the catch of the day. The greatest lure of all is lust, well written again, thank you."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "The Fishing (Ho)le" by Malcholm Dark
- "Yeah, I've been here before. "Reeled into her long boat of lust" "Placed on a stringer with others just like me towed along behind her"....masterful images of the proverbial hook in mouth. Well done, Malcholm. Always glad to see a new one from you."
Posted by Unknown on "The Fishing (Ho)le" by Malcholm Dark
- "trawlers and long line fishing ... raping the oceans...recreational fishers and kids , banned...or is that just me...huh...raptor? ... ~strokes imaginary beard~"
Posted by kinkifrog on "The Fishing (Ho)le" by Malcholm Dark
- "Love this..great story...wish i could shred and feed like that...make walking those empty streets a little more fun....run rabbit run...hear the laughter....then just another quiet nightly walk...there is a power to this that i really like....or maybe a bit jealous of...
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Posted by boneplate on "I Am Monster" by Malcholm Dark
- "The Power emitted in this piece is astonishing, especially in the line "My Streets!" as if you own the night and it's inhabitants. Were you being a Vampire or a werewolf or just a general monster, just one thing I was trying to work out. Brilliant piece, write on."
Posted by Unknown on "I Am Monster" by Malcholm Dark
- "A Beautiful piece, I loved the structure to it, rhyms and repitition have always a favourite of mine. The progession of the story was amazing and vicious similtaneously. "Sing the haunted hymns, memories survive" Amazing line, love the emotion behind it through music. Great piece, Write on."
Posted by Unknown on "What Survives" by Malcholm Dark
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