I Am Monster

By Malcholm Dark

Tonight I walk
Within the shadows
Music in my head
That 'empty street' song
Dark streets
Silent streets
Dirty--desolate
My streets!


He steps out
They step out
I am surrounded
Eight wild dogs
They want money
My valuables
My life
Back against the wall!


Guns--knives--pipes
Welcome to my world
I smile and laugh
My eyes turn red
My fangs elongate
Long deadly claws
Screams fill the night
I take--shred--feed!


Some escape me
Run rabbit, run
They run aimlessly
Head-long into fear
I hunt
I take
I kill
I feed!


Tonight I walk
Music in my head
That 'empty street' song
Alone I walk
Within the shadows
I am hunter
I am nightmare
I am monster! 

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Copyright 2010 Malcholm Dark
Published on Saturday, April 10, 2010.     Filed under: "Horror" and "Poetry"
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  • Katarina On Tuesday, January 28, 2014, Katarina (7)By person wrote:

    Really good story. I want more

  • A former member wrote: a true portrayal of how people can be bloodsucking monsters sometimes

  • boneplate On Thursday, June 23, 2011, boneplate (56)By person wrote:

    Love this..great story...wish i could shred and feed like that...make walking those empty streets a little more fun....run rabbit run...hear the laughter....then just another quiet nightly walk...there is a power to this that i really like....or maybe a bit jealous of...

  • A former member wrote: The Power emitted in this piece is astonishing, especially in the line "My Streets!" as if you own the night and it's inhabitants. Were you being a Vampire or a werewolf or just a general monster, just one thing I was trying to work out. Brilliant piece, write on.

  • Devilish On Wednesday, June 15, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    I fuckin love monsters... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: DUDE!!!! that was freaken awsome!!!! Scholar

  • Nameless Pariah On Friday, June 10, 2011, Nameless Pariah (126)By person wrote:

    Haha! Loved this!

  • A former member wrote: it was a cool adventure to visit the world of horror... fresh feeling! thanks, pavel

  • A former member wrote: great job this is a really good

  • lupus tenebrae On Sunday, April 11, 2010, lupus tenebrae (860)By person wrote:

    Great write again Dark, it's funny that the guys that got killed are usually the ones I say "I don't want to run into in a dark alley" lol. There's a lesson here, don't mess with random strangers or they will morph into a monster and destroy you. Thanks for sharing. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Great write. Scholar

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