Comments by All Members
- "Powerful write! I felt the ending coming before I knew it was about AIDS... sex is never a sin, but knowingly spreading AIDS is a terribly reprehensible act! It is slow murder without even the courtesy to look your victim in the face and let them die quickly. My heart goes out to all those who are unknowingly infected (regardless of lifestyle, because despite what the morally sanctimonious may say, no one deserves to be infected), and my rage goes out to those that willfully or carelessly spread it."
Posted by TheLastDragon on "Never A Dream Come True" by Malcholm Dark
- "Very powerful breakdown of the psychopathic creature with even more powerful imagery! The phrasing of the eyes evokes a profoundly disturbing image of madness. I love it!"
Posted by TheLastDragon on "The Melding" by Malcholm Dark
- "Excellent write! I love the classic betrayal theme here, and I enjoyed how the similar phrasing compared the two betrayers of your heart. Very Shakespearean feel with the revenge twist at the end! I look forward to reading more of your work."
Posted by TheLastDragon on "A Taste Of Betrayal" by Malcholm Dark
- "haha, I remember that tune.... I think keeping the 'fantastic' was an awesome editorial decision... I mean, I can't think of that tune without that exuberant plastic/fantastic. Great lyrics, M. Thanks for the coffee spit. haha. cheers. "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Demimonde Girl--Barbie gone bad" by Malcholm Dark
- "The sad thing is, I already had the melody down to begin with. However, your lyrics made the song tolerable, as my body hasn't rejected this version haha. I'm sure all the "plastic" went straight to her chest, I mean head. You sir are a riot, kudos."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Demimonde Girl--Barbie gone bad" by Malcholm Dark
- "I fell asleep in a strip club, woke up with a stripper putting all sorts of things in my mouth,never fell asleep again, never got her number either, thats what the youth need, strippers, for teachers then lets see who falls asleep. "
Posted by alex herewane on "Narcoleptic Youth Gone Wild" by Malcholm Dark
- "I used to doze off in class. People are inside far too much these days, I think. Get outside & run, I say. That'll perk 'em right up. Even aimless walking is wonderful for mind & alertness. It's better than a speed habit. They're all about the sleeping pills & energy drinks nowadays. Thanks for the write, Malcholm. You task my mind to unique poetic realms."
Posted by Unknown on "Narcoleptic Youth Gone Wild" by Malcholm Dark
- "Excellent my friend:) A fitting tribute to the falling youth and the monotone teacher that put you to sleep. So you can catch up from the night before. Thank you! Brings back the good memories:) "
Posted by johnbevan17 on "Narcoleptic Youth Gone Wild" by Malcholm Dark
- "I could envision a narcoleptic protest, I hope their picket signs are made of goose down. Sometimes it's hard to determine who's narcoleptic, or just really tired. Viva la narcolepsy. Write onward my friend."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Narcoleptic Youth Gone Wild" by Malcholm Dark
- "stack those chips and keep those queens 'till you need 'em...served up cool as a cucumber...this one's particularly clever Malcholm . you know that don't you ;)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "The Gambler" by Malcholm Dark
- "You have no idea how hilariously appropriate the author's note is to me. I could've used a pair of machine gun toting Queens a few times. Surely a pair of aces in the hole. Right on, man!"
Posted by Unknown on "The Gambler" by Malcholm Dark
- "Seeing as I am a gambling man myself, maybe I should invest in some "feminine touches"? You know, "feminine touches". Make me an offer I can't refuse. Of course, the first inkling of a flush, and I'm folding. Another well wrought work, keep those ladies close, for insurance purposes."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "The Gambler" by Malcholm Dark
- "A pussy pilfered! Scratch her eyes out - and then read my "Invisible" that I channeled you into greatness.
Develish calls this "whoring my poetry" and she is right - but some are shameless. Don't be a stranger; your the best!"
Posted by dwells on "Blame--A Letter To My Love" by Malcholm Dark
- "Haha! Great ending, Mr. Dark. I have been in these situations before. You gotta stand your ground in these custody fights. If'n yer down for some cat-nappin' in the future, just let me know. I mean, a man needs his pussy, right? Always a pleasure, sir."
Posted by Unknown on "Blame--A Letter To My Love" by Malcholm Dark
- ""That's OK, I killed our love from the grassy knoll." The shot heard round the world, the assassination of Cupid. Why do they always have to take the cat? Can't they leave the pussy alone? Nicely written my friend, although it's a bit eerie that you included the Titanic and I just read an article about it beforehand."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Blame--A Letter To My Love" by Malcholm Dark
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