Comments by All Members
- "After finishing the first quarter of the poem I was skeptical about continuing on to the final stanza; however, I'm happy I did. Well constructed and as being both a chef and an avid writer this piece particularly struck a chord with me. Our works share a similar dark atmosphere. Bravo!"
Posted by DanLong01057 on "My Recipe For Dark Poetry" by Malcholm Dark
- "We have to tear this all apart before we can rebuild it. Hopefully, we'll at least get some lube...somehow I doubt it."
Posted by Unknown on "Sheep Whisperer" by Malcholm Dark
- "haha... all huggers be damned! heh... good to see your words and humor have not abandoned us, welcome back, mr dark, and thanks, too."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Tall Trees Suck" by Malcholm Dark
- "The melding are truly an art...I like the most? is the heart_There is no love from within
Nor, the glitter of compassion
Only shafts of ice and crystalline
This, the house of pain....truly wisdom and depth, you'd penned this one directly through...to my alley and I can't resist to obey...well done my friend..."
Posted by Unknown on "The Melding" by Malcholm Dark
- "Makes me nostalgic for 'Excalibur', the fine film from '81, still my favorite interpretation. It's likely that the real "King Arthur" was of Roman ancestry. I also have a softspot for the legend. Enjoyed these words, Mr. Dark, glad to see you around again."
Posted by Unknown on "Merlin's Revenge" by Malcholm Dark
- "Blame it on the minstrels and bards, good one Malcholm! Co-incidentally, I posted an update on the Pendragon tale almost exactly one year ago, entitled "Camelot D.C." - cheers sir."
Posted by dwells on "Merlin's Revenge" by Malcholm Dark
- "that's the trouble when only the elite in society can read or write...so much of history is skewed ... facts become coloured by the bards and poets who recall their deeds and embroider the tales which take on legendary and supernatural qualities...what actually happened is anyone's guess... thanks Malcholm :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Merlin's Revenge" by Malcholm Dark
- "How awesome of you to pay homage to me, seriously though, anyone that thinks haiku sucks wouldn't be as good at it as you. *Binds self to tree in protest*"
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Tall Trees Suck" by Malcholm Dark
- "I loved the trees until one day i got struck by one of them in my drunken driving sessions :/
and don't you hate when you are trying to write haiku but the syllables never seems to match up :/
Damn it *breaks keyboard *
thanks for sharing :D"
Posted by Unknown on "Tall Trees Suck" by Malcholm Dark
- "great message :)
never blame a monster before knowing why he became one :)...and then throw him in jail :P
jk...thanks for sharing :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Monster Of Society" by Malcholm Dark
- "Malcholm is definitely Dark on this one, well done and think you might enjoy "The Assassin's Prayer" that I penned in a similar vein. This work is making me paranoid - maybe Santa will bring me a bullet proof vest for Christmas, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "L.D.S.K. (Long Distant Serial Killer)" by Malcholm Dark
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