Comments by All Members
- ""like a cigarette butt you crush me with your heel.all my emotions are not real"this resonates through me.thanx for sharing"
Posted by Unknown on "Disappointment" by Wiccad
- "I like it, you managed to rhyme it without having to use a real rhyme scheme, great job, and the wording was spot on, nice, keep up the good work, write the fuck on!"
Posted by HeadpatSlut on "Disappointment" by Wiccad
- "Good lord, this is so revealing... great emotional content... I must say this is the best I've read from you W... great final line... thank-you so much "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Begin Again" by Wiccad
- "Wow, this is good... what a great idea to write about... worded perfectly... a pure enjoyment to read, thanks W, another fine piece of poetry"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "One" by Wiccad
- "Damn, this was a powerful piece...and sadly...full of truth. What have we become... I really enjoyed this. Excellent work."
Posted by Unknown on "Begin Again" by Wiccad
- "W, you are so good, and angry.... "low life bringers, billies on the ground, I bet they slither without a sound"... Fantastic line and so true...
A well written poem, thank-you"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Anger, I Know I Got It" by Wiccad
- "Wow W, that was a tremendously visual piece...
I like how you became the crow, so cool.... Your poems do you great justice, thank-you... "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Mute and Deafening" by Wiccad
- "wow, I dub thee unforgiven... that was so good...
your emotional visions are the best.... "punish and banish me from your heart"... such a great line, thanks... "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Midnight Chimes" by Wiccad
- "The last line did it for me..I enjoyed this read.. Thoughts ponder and poison the air around..your aura..never leaving you alone..Yet you're made to destroy that which is your antidote...Written well..very thought provoking..given little information..the possibilities to what you said are endless.."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Midnight Chimes" by Wiccad
- "Thanx for the comments.........I had a hard time with the wording of this. It makes me sad like speaking at a funeral."
Posted by Wiccad on "1692" by Wiccad
- "Well done, I was wondering when you were going to do this piece... great emotional content,
you had the reader with you till the end... now you know where the son of Sam got the idea about the dog... write on"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "1692" by Wiccad
- "The sorrow fills my heart for the loss of innocents. A very nice write, and tale told. These innocent women didn't need to suffer as they did. False accussations should blister the tongues. *sigh*"
Posted by Rowan on "1692" by Wiccad
- "Goodness, that was a great read... Dark visuals pounding away at the reader... The last verse was perfection and made the entire poem what it is... a masterpiece... thanks. "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Rattling The Bones" by Wiccad
- "Very good, I love the rhyme scheme and the repeating lines... The meat bags...brilliant! A very enjoyable read, thanks... "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "We" by Wiccad
- "Incredible visulas, nicely done. Death, a hole and I am gone, all the things for a great dark poem. I like the morph tie in that was cool. Thanks for the write."
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Dream State" by Wiccad
- "The visuals are so strong. And no sense of fear. I really loved "Making room for my transformation
Into nothing"......although that seems to be the state I currently reside. Great write. Thank you. "
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Dream State" by Wiccad
- "i think that i thought about someone-something- completely different than what you wrote about but it was equally beautiful. "
Posted by Mars on "She Who Walks" by Wiccad
- "Excellent write, and especially dark. "Fermenting and rotten" that provided me with some images, I'll never forget. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Souls Funeral" by Wiccad
- "Perfect... Well written. I love the repeating lines, great flow. This has got to be your best work. Thank-you for the write."
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Thoughts" by Wiccad
- "The beginning was sad and then took a twist and became something else but something wise. We are at the mercy of the ground beneath us as has been apparent recently. An interesting read."
Posted by Dilated View on "Thoughts" by Wiccad
- "Good lord! You have a way about your poetry. My soul is on fire now. thank-you. write on."
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Lust" by Wiccad
- "Wow! Intense and well written. Was the first line right, it slowed me down? I do enjoy reading your thoughts, thank-you."
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Not By Choice" by Wiccad
- "Wiccad, that was without a doubt the best poem of yours I have read. The wonderful darkness and a perfect ending
made for a fantastic read. The total flow was just perfect. thank-you!"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Soul Mate" by Wiccad
- "i liked this one...very dark and haha bet it will scare the jezuses outta little kid.. xD well keep up the good writes"
Posted by Unknown on "Playground Hounds" by Wiccad
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