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Lust
By Wiccad
She lies there perfect in mind
Perfect in body
Every mans desire
Igniting his fire
Leaving behind the true one
The one
who pulled him
Out of that black pit of despair
Was his branch,
never bowed
Two decades of shaping
Bending and supporting
Growing together
Loving and living
That look of disgust
The hateful way of being
Never wanting or needing
Simply thrown
away
Taking perfect over commitment
Touching, tasting
Lapping up every drop
Pounding it till you lose your breath
Take the knife again
Jab it deep and give a turn
This perfection
shall burn
White hot then cold
Have broken the perfect
mold
Bury it deep
And under our tree
Two decades built
up
Our roots will smother thee
Cold and damp
Dark
and dank
The perfect final rest
The perfect way to end
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Copyright 2009 Wiccad
Published on Wednesday, December 30, 2009.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
This one was a dream turned nightmare.Comments on "Lust"
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A former member wrote:
The fire I feel from this piece is candidly remarkable. I can feel a distinct presence come from it.
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On Monday, August 23, 2010, Mylissa
(845)
wrote:
This sings intensity and a stunning flow of moments. A beautiful write indeed.
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On Wednesday, March 3, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
Good lord! You have a way about your poetry. My soul is on fire now. thank-you. write on.
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A former member wrote:
Wow very engaging.
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A former member wrote:
Well, I give up trying to have any sort of response to your work. Because everytime I read one of your pieces, I'm left speechless! I read them in a sort of backwards way, but your work inspires me! Keep it up! =]
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On Wednesday, December 30, 2009, Riven Waker
(323) wrote:
i like perfection and suffering as juxtaposed - nicely done
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A former member wrote:
It's hard to have the ones we love torn from us... Thank you for your poem.
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