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Disappointment
By Wiccad
Every move I make
Every breathe I take
Every decision I make
Every word I write
Every emotion I have
Every thing that I
am......
Like a cigarette butt you crush me with your heel
All my emotions are not real
In your messed up world I am contagious
My thoughts are contaminating
My actions will be your undoing
Best just keep your distance from me......
I may infect and
inject human emotion
Into your happy little world where nothing is
real
Will not even listen to anyones opinion
You are poison
to the new ones of this world
Filling their heads with marshmallow
clouds
Do not want the truth.......it may cause frowning..........
You discriminate against those who write what's in their souls
You are judge, jury, and executioner of everyone with talent
And
choose not to hear or read our negative thoughts
God forbid you
just may have one of your own
You punish me because I have negativity.........
Every move I make
Every breathe I take
Every decision
I make
Every word I write
Every emotion I have
Every thing
that I am.....
Is obviously a disappointment
It doesn't
matter, you will never read this anyway.
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Copyright 2010 Wiccad
Published on Thursday, April 29, 2010.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Disappointment"
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On Saturday, May 8, 2010, Wiccad
(125)
wrote:
Thanks everyone for your comments I really appreciate all you have to say.
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On Friday, April 30, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
Beautiful W, a well crafted piece... had you not told me, i wouldn't have known this was about your mother... poems about relatives are hard to write sometimes... I applaud you here, a wonderful poem... I like the repeating verses... write on
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A former member wrote:
"like a cigarette butt you crush me with your heel.all my emotions are not real"this resonates through me.thanx for sharing
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On Thursday, April 29, 2010, HeadpatSlut
(259) wrote:
I like it, you managed to rhyme it without having to use a real rhyme scheme, great job, and the wording was spot on, nice, keep up the good work, write the fuck on!
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