Comments by All Members
- "Think you have the right medium here. Love the imagery and the way your emotions felt as I read them, and I do love the behemoth shirt."
Posted by ANGELSLAYER on "Funeral Dirge" by DescendingDown
- "indeed; when one leaves such a mark, its haunt is less empty than full. .. . .living off of ghosts. trembly thing here. and the musical reference makes me think of crescendos and adagios; the build and fall of a realtionship. ... . of a heart that learns how to beat with[in] another's. .. . ."
Posted by Unknown on "His Hands.. My Body.. In A Mozart D Minor" by DescendingDown
- "A distant and hollowed cry of longing. Like two ghost trains that collided, just passing through each other. Whistles howling off into the night as they speed toward different corners of the countryside. A very short yet enthralling piece of poetry. +tpu+"
Posted by Unknown on "His Hands.. My Body.. In A Mozart D Minor" by DescendingDown
- "mozart n whiskey.... n these words, what scene could be more enticing? love the third sentence....... a unique expression of love, of an encounter... of what love gives to the future.... perhaps the art of love, the classical aesthetic of parting lovers (mozart)... given a harsher reality of intoxicating depth (whiskey).... perhaps. "
Posted by Unknown on "His Hands.. My Body.. In A Mozart D Minor" by DescendingDown
- "Descriptive and lovely write. Your pain comes through, although I too know it is sometimes hard to let that out. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Funeral Dirge" by DescendingDown
- "love always dies hard..... with death throes and convulsions.... and yet it is only an after thought so very sought after...... lively words here.... love the elegies image.... welcome to the valley!"
Posted by Unknown on "Funeral Dirge" by DescendingDown
- "I disagree, dear. When two work together, the finished product never belongs more to one or the other. This was spawned from your idea, your theme, your tone. Take credit where credit is due. :)"
Posted by Six-Out on "Exit Wounds" by DescendingDown
- "Read in one breath, full on with strong emotions, I love this particular topic, I can never get enough... I loved the ending ! "
Posted by Unknown on "The Black Suits" by DescendingDown
- "By far your best piece, thus far. I think it's the distant/objective voice that makes it. The last 7 lines are particularly good. +tpu+"
Posted by Unknown on "The Black Suits" by DescendingDown
- ""3 more shots & I'm drowning
In a gluttonous affinity" -- totally dig this line, as well as the ending, I agree with Lolita it was sort of like a sudden stillness following the explosion. Tres bien. "
Posted by TheUltimateOutlaw on "The Ossuary" by DescendingDown
- "Had sort of inverted slam dance finish, you know? The rest of it seemed so loud, and then sudden silence. A lovely little trip for my senses, I liked it."
Posted by Lolita on "The Ossuary" by DescendingDown
- "Waking up is always the hardest part. May not have been what you were talking about, but I gathered that for myself. A realization that the past was nothing but a dream that unprepares you for the real thing, what you see when you finally burn the skin from blind eyes. Like seeing for the first time, it's painful. Wonderful turn of conscience."
Posted by Aleas on "Freedom: Act 1, Scene 1" by DescendingDown
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