Blunt Force Trauma

By DescendingDown

Alone again today..
A rarity, this cold day in Hell

The black sheets rustle in an echo of deafening silence next to me
Like an acidic laced Chinese water torture
The sheer force of its energy sends chills like knives running over the covering of my bones
Puncturing my veins

A ghost town in my heart..
& the rusty door to my tranquility moans in the dying winds

( I'm waiting, aching for the dust to settle.. )

A symphony of static vibrations corrupts the transmission of my solace
As I climb out of the bloody wreckage that is my mind
 

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Copyright 2009 Kandice Bush
Published on Tuesday, September 22, 2009.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Six-Out On Thursday, October 1, 2009, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    mmm. It tastes like corruption. This is divine in it's dark beauty.

  • Ashteroth On Friday, September 25, 2009, Ashteroth (192)By person wrote:

    Oh meant to say...great title also, very catchy. ~Ash

  • Ashteroth On Friday, September 25, 2009, Ashteroth (192)By person wrote:

    Captures your discontent and grinding frustration well. Nicely done ~Ash

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