My Soliloquy

By DescendingDown

Disfigured with sin

His catatonic stare impaling
Through smoldering eyes that scorch my soul

The desp(air) thickens in my lungs

Submerged in the charred taste of sorrow's laughter

(Stripped & choking)
On deceitful thoughts left dripping from my foolish grin..



*Authors note ~
Many thanks to my dear friend Bruce for his contribution to this piece.
  www.myspace.com/xavier_valdruid
 

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Copyright 2009 Kandice Bush
Published on Friday, October 2, 2009.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Submerged in the charred taste of sorrow's laughter.....love that line....excellent poem

  • Deaths Apostle On Friday, October 2, 2009, Deaths Apostle (65)By person wrote:

    I love poems like this...they don't necassarily come from the heart more from the part of it that's missing...A+

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