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"â€œWith expressive hands and obvious holesâ€ perhaps a double entendres? Interesting read"
Posted by Cassette on "we cry together (but i alone)" by disposable

""i noticed that... she couldn't move, unless i did." - I love the way you chose to close this piece, it added a great deal of profound depth wrapped in a simple truth. Wonderful piece! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "something came into play" by disposable

"I love the imagery in this; great job!"
Posted by Joel Baldwin on "our last breath" by disposable

"I can really relate to this, making others happy is a constant battle. They have to make their selves happy, :) Nice poem, ~^_^~"
Posted by blue angel on "mistake.n forsake.n me" by disposable

"Interesting piece! I love the way this is structured and how "bringing up divorce" and "messing up the spinach" have drifted into equal proportion. Nice one! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "mistake.n forsake.n me" by disposable

"This felt very personal but was written in a way that even the things others don't relate to they can understand and it still feels familiar."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "the dead don't hurt as much" by disposable

"In a word: delicious. This is the kind of poem that sends shivers down my spine. I wish I could bookmark this already! "
Posted by Unknown on "but not softly" by disposable

"Oh yeah! Not softly but hard and with strenght that is so good. Fantastic and i love it. "
Posted by M Morgan on "but not softly" by disposable

"Desire and lust expressed incredibly cleverly. This piece is unusual, unique and makes you want to read it several times.... ( and I did) "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "but not softly" by disposable

"wow, totally awed by this masterpiece."
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "but not softly" by disposable

"Ok .. Well How nice.... "
Posted by Devilish on "absence of white" by disposable

"wow. I hope that this person has come to see how much you care for them. Your words are full of beautiful sadness. "
Posted by starrynite522 on "we cry together (but i alone)" by disposable

"the closing captured everything of how i feel; how we all feel some i s'pose. what would we/could we do if we ridded ourselves of our selves? our egos? our wants and our wounds? unending questions......"
Posted by Unknown on "something came into play" by disposable

"Beautiful imagery and a wonderful movement from pleasure to pain"
Posted by Unknown on "sense me" by disposable

"You should definately write more, I like it, im off to read more of your works"
Posted by Unknown on "we cry together (but i alone)" by disposable

"Ah there is a reason to live! but is it the subject of your poem, or is it your poem?"
Posted by DorothyValiga on "the sound of my name in your mouth" by disposable

"Such a divine piece. You capture perfectly little capsules of time that one holds dear. And I got a shiver thinking back to a moment hearing my own name on someone's lips who I thought loved me. "
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "the sound of my name in your mouth" by disposable

"Ithis has such sweetness. Like pure love with out the underones of distrust and cynicism that so many have. beautiful"
Posted by Dei on "the sound of my name in your mouth" by disposable

"Very interesting...I like stuff like this that can seem to mean many things."
Posted by Vampira on "picasso, you are not" by disposable

"Good choice for poem of the day. Awesome piece. Flowed nicely and nicely worded.."
Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "picasso, you are not" by disposable

"Wow. This was amazing. The metaphors where great and it had a good flow. Overall, it was excellent and worthy of being the Poem of the Day."
Posted by Unknown on "picasso, you are not" by disposable

"aaaaaaaaah yes, such a way with words... and the maturation of your thoughts before me always makes me smile no matter how sad those thoughts may be. I believe I may have felt this disconnection, this abjection ... I wondered about "procision" it seemed to be a conscious choice but I wasn't confident in rendering an interpretation.... to some extent I felt like this spoke on behalf of women; being misunderstood.... feeling guilty for not being understood... such a voice, such a sad but revealing voice, perhaps just the severed voice we all need to hear more often. *bows before poetess of captured sorrows*"
Posted by Unknown on "something came into play" by disposable

"this is some mind-bending subject matter - nicely done"
Posted by Riven Waker on "something came into play" by disposable

"glad to see you posting again...always a fan of your poetry..."
Posted by Narcissa on "something came into play" by disposable

"...Wow! ...I really liked this poem. imagery of the trapped person inside of the mirror.....thats how i decept it, anyway:) keep writing! "
Posted by maggot death on "something came into play" by disposable

"An observation to which most of us never pay attention, but you've captured it."
Posted by Unknown on "something came into play" by disposable

"I love the innocence in which this is written. It could be written from a sixteen year old feeling love for the first time or the dream of love which is ageless. Beautiful and elegant. I love the delicacy of your work and how you leave so much left unsaid."
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "the sound of my name in your mouth" by disposable

"I'm totally with ebonyamore on this one. Awesome."
Posted by Qurious on "but not softly" by disposable

"Truly Outstanding. Reminds me of a time when I believed in destiny and "meant to be." I hope it still exists for some, and even if it does not, that the mirage persists until there is no difference between real and imagined."
Posted by Scarrzz on "the sound of my name in your mouth" by disposable

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