Comments by All Members
- "There is nothing more beautiful than when written truly from the heart. This has been done for the world to see. I imagine this would be the most beautiful poem in the world to Andrew. I felt your anxiety."
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "My Love for You" by BrokenAngel
- "I liked the "Youll figure it out soon". The end tied it all together very sweetly. The realisation that like becomes love was beautifully captured "
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "My Love Life" by BrokenAngel
- "Paaaaaace yourself. =p I can't say that Im a fan of the "blurp" style this is. I think certain lines might have a bit more punch if this were structured a bit differently. The last line by itself was a nice touch and is exactly what I mean, but que sera sera. Who's really here for my entertainment and judgment anyway?"
Posted by Aleas on "in the darkness of the night" by BrokenAngel
- "I honestly think the three poems altogether would have made for an interesting piece, as opposed to three separate works (all good in the own right). Different strokes for d'fr'n folks, I s'pose."
Posted by Aleas on "God's backyard" by BrokenAngel
- "As stated by Aleas, this is very deserving of comments. The concept is quite simple but coloured so beautifully. I hope very much that the end is how you say. Lovely piece :-)"
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "the cemetery" by BrokenAngel
- "I dont know how I missed reading this. Such a simple concept that screams desperate love. If only love was that simple :-)"
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "the flowers" by BrokenAngel
- "Pretty positive message. Which, suffice to say, is surprising! Not all of us are forgotten, and ultimately, its up to us as to whether we stand alone and "fade to dust", or remain eternal, in the hearts and minds of generations, our bust somewhere classical as a reminder of how things were and what we stood for, what we loved and how we loved back. And more thoughts follow. This is deserving of more comments and kudos. But alas, such is this website."
Posted by Aleas on "the cemetery" by BrokenAngel
- "yes thats exactly what i was trying to express. =]ill walk down the hall @ school and look @ every single person... and not one will look @ me."
Posted by BrokenAngel on "Ghost" by BrokenAngel
- "And that maybe one day, when everyone else slows down to take a look at whats really important. They'll realize what it is that they were really afraid of, and can only hope that you are still willing to be that friend that they might need."
Posted by Daughter_Of_The_Moon on "Ghost" by BrokenAngel
- "Honestly I think this is one of those types of poems that the viewer can read a part of their own life from. Their own feelings.
To me it reminds me of how sometimes, I feel as if everyone looks around me as if i'm not there. Like taking the time to acknowledge my existence would just hinder them. And that only those few people who notice you for who and what you truly are, are the people who really understand what it is that is most important in life."
Posted by Daughter_Of_The_Moon on "Ghost" by BrokenAngel
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