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smoke servant
By BrokenAngel
steal some smoke
darken your eyes
with your blood red lips
& heart crystallized
engrave your name
on your pallet of lies
your life's a dark painting
gray and black, but no white
so carve secretly into my face
until i am labeled yours
til i become the black of your heart
the smoke that darkens yours eyes
until you bloody my lips
and crystallize my heart
you continue engraving your name on my heart
carving and scraping till im perfectly formed
and you stare at your creation
i am the perfect image of you
the hellish black angel
thats pleasing to you
its like looking in a mirror
or the distant future...
where ill be waiting
Master
12-21-05
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© 2008 BrokenAngel
Published on Tuesday, October 14, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "smoke servant"
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On Thursday, May 14, 2009, Huey Lewis
(22)
wrote:
this was a gooder. nice work.
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A former member wrote:
Captivated me till the end. Nice flow and use of images.
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On Wednesday, October 22, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(359) wrote:
woah. An intense flow of images here, smoke servant... I love the idea, well done
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A former member wrote:
INDEED! please do write and post more!
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On Tuesday, October 14, 2008, disposable
(105) wrote:
ouch! nice imagery tho. write on...
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