Comments by All Members
- "Nicely spoken sentiment that stretches the normal boundaries of the "perception" of God."
Posted by Sketso on ""Beyond"" by bpathos
- "I was drawn in from the beginning, and this write gave me a sense of comfort/hope. I say that,, wisdom is not given freely it is earned. You dug deep within yourself and realized... Things do in-fact happen for a reason. We must dwell and face darkness in-order to rise above it. insightful and strongly expressed piece of poetry you have here,, just humbly beautiful. Bows- "
Posted by soul_versing on ""Beyond"" by bpathos
- "You're right. A story unread is a story untold. And a story untold is a story forgotten and non-existent...beautiful write"
Posted by Unknown on "" Reader Writer "" by bpathos
- "True, any product needs a consumer. Or perhaps it is a service we perform. Choosing your audience is key however. A much enjoyed read."
Posted by Unknown on "" Reader Writer "" by bpathos
- "From first place now fallen into third world (what happened to second place?) - we are doomed by our legislative, duly elected servants - sworn to our protection - but empowered by their office against us: the illiterati, unwashed, beasts of the field - and our shepherds are monsters!
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Posted by dwells on ""Newmerica"" by bpathos
- "Much to contemplate here in the plethora of truths and imagery presented. Initially thinking this might be about Colonel Sanders, and then I got swept away with your fine presentation. Uniquely outstanding and very relatable, thank you BP."
Posted by dwells on "Finger Lick'in Truth" by bpathos
- "A Nihilist perspective portrayed in a metaphor to the lost and forgotten, and the Captain lashed frozen to the wheel of the Hesperus - perfect picture for man vs. the elemental. Then nothing filled by something is the power that only women know too, cheers BP and sorry I missed this one earlier (welcome again!)"
Posted by dwells on "Milk Carton Portrait" by bpathos
- "Marvellous missive and the insights were so striking, that I was both enriched and yet somehow defeated when it ended. Much truth here, thanks! "
Posted by dwells on " " Dark Anthem "" by bpathos
- "Usually, straight rhyme bothers me, the words always sound too cheesy put together. This is one of the first poems with rhyme that caught my attention. Loved it"
Posted by Unknown on " " Dark Anthem "" by bpathos
- "Heavy duty prognostications and the world spins, wobbling on its axis, but yet for a while longer. Much enjoyed the future view and I can't disagree, unless the Luddites have a resurgence, or God blinds the one-eyed monsters that enslave us all, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "" Overfuture "" by bpathos
- "Ahhh a poem wrote on modern day science. Love the expressions as if a computer main frame was talking itself. Add the computer voice while reading and you get a even better picture. A machine cannot compute it would seem. The cyborg cannot seem to understand. As it accesses information at your every command. A machine constantly drumming, ahhh the use of words mixed perfectly together.Your images and use of words were very good. Thankyou for the poem."
Posted by Undertaker on "" Overfuture "" by bpathos
- "And the one-eyed monster will consume all. We are indeed re-writing history and how will we apply our new knowledge? For that is the wisdom of imformation - all else is donkeys braying in darkness. Thanks for this insightful write."
Posted by dwells on "" Infodrome "" by bpathos
- "I loved the usage of modern day sites we depend on so much. The tone is a bit satirical but all in all amusing. -Later "
Posted by With love_Crow on "" Infodrome "" by bpathos
- "well done! .... i liked this a lot ....aye! .... the river styx hath no passenger of me, at this time .... Thanks for the view! "
Posted by Opklot on ""Hard Crossing"" by bpathos
- "standing at the fork in the road; staring down that well traveled prong.. it's enough to taint the taste of temptation with bitterness. very nicely done."
Posted by elisa on ""Hard Crossing"" by bpathos
- "strung of vomiting seconds...man I love that line. Time is just like that, spit out at you with force and distaste. Good stuff."
Posted by Amaryllis on ""Hard Crossing"" by bpathos
- "ther is alot of bitterness andd pain here.... love can lift us just as well as it can crush us.
a heartfelt piece. thanks for sharing"
Posted by natalie on "Romance Lost" by bpathos
- "I've always loved your poetry, but I think this is by far my favorite of yours...Thank you so much for this beautiful write...Truly, I haven't the words to express how deeply this has struck me."
Posted by Blood Saga on "Milk Carton Portrait" by bpathos
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