Comments by All Members
- "Great piece to feature for POD. I love the introspective nature of the questions asked. Reminds me of the age old question, "What if my red was your green?" Well done, poet, and many congratulations."
Posted by Unknown on "What If..." by Temerity
- "So very close to home on this one... Your view seems as mine in many ways... Dead to me, no matter the passion I had or yet have... Thank you for a great write."
Posted by redfurrydragon on "All That You Were" by Temerity
- "oh wow! that second stanza spoke to me! the whole poem was well penned, but i just feel the second verse so much. thanks for sharing"
Posted by natalie on "Ethereal Innuendo" by Temerity
- "this is beautiful in its melancholia. we are indeed born into strife. thank you for posting.
and welcome(back?) to dp."
Posted by natalie on "Fall Softly" by Temerity
- "nice concept... for the love of strife... life keeps waking us from slumbers. thanks for sharing, and welcome back :)"
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Fall Softly" by Temerity
- "Midnight in the forest, a very spiritual time and place for sure. Dryads and Nyads carrying-on until all hours! Very well-written and sensual."
Posted by dwells on "Dark Dance of Desire" by Temerity
- "If we spoke with our eyes, the only ones aware... you had me from that line on. Good job starting out solid and finishing strong."
Posted by Ocean of Truth on "What If..." by Temerity
- ""insidious lies we are taught..infecting our minds as we rot"...That did it for me..how so very dark, disturbing and true. We are the species that turned the world black..and unfertile...Excellent"
Posted by Ceolwulf on "Strange Sanctuary" by Temerity
- "oh this...this feels all too familiar. they can bend us...but we break ourselves trying to fix something that we know is broken. sad and bitter and had just enough bite ~k"
Posted by Sin on "Naked Truths" by Temerity
- "This piece is powerfully haunting. I loved all the lines of this poem, but the last lines were the cherry on the cake!"
Posted by Edgewalker on "All That You Were" by Temerity
- "It cuts to the core with delicately arranged, violent imagery. Wonderful job"
Posted by Unknown on "Depraver" by Temerity
- "I know pleasure and I know pain.
I know boredom, inertia, & redundance.
I know them like the seasons.
My favorite stanza, this is pretty good."
Posted by Unknown on "Decideratum" by Temerity
- "this was amazing and the visual image, it all goes so well together..it's beautiful and magnificent."
Posted by Unknown on "Uncharted" by Temerity
- "if a cigarette could talk, those are the words it would say, verbatim... this here is like the smoke that burns my lungs.. from the first puff to the last.. dangerously addictive... "
Posted by Unknown on "Smoking Etiquette" by Temerity
- "A nice reflection on the passage of time, and its affect on us in gerneral. Sometimes I hope that last line is true...others, well...I throw down the hoe...sometimes I just wonder."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Uncharted" by Temerity
- "Well... I can see the shock wave coming. Damn, truly the best work I've seen on here in a while from what I've read. It made heart damn near explode against my ribcage. Wow!"
Posted by Unknown on "Uncharted" by Temerity
- "You get comfortable and then some some son of a bitch has to throw a curve. To me trying to anticipate, to expect the unexpected, is a waste of time. No point, when life is so full of surprises. Who you are is never who you stay."
Posted by Unknown on "My Indignation" by Temerity
- "I like this a lot. It was a great change of pace. Nice to something different. Cool write. I Remember reading some work by Henry Rollins that this reminds me of."
Posted by Unknown on "Smoking Etiquette" by Temerity
- "BAM! Now THAT'S kick ass poetry. I love the form of the piece as well! Like a ship sailing towards you.. You are brilliant!"
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Uncharted" by Temerity
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