All That You Were
By Temerity
Your last Hello blew rancid across my face
As I pretended not to notice the smell
Your noxious lies tripped auditory alarms
As I closed my mind to the sound
Your clothing barely covered a bloating torso
Pale flesh withered beneath shrouded disguise
Cyanotic fingers caressed dull tresses
Eyes like putrid pools stared lifeless
Desperate to resuscitate one spark of recognition
All that you were, all you could have been
All that we'd shared, dreamed, dared...
Those vital signs of life absent as your soul
I pounded your heart with fervid fists
Your pernicious resistence my preclusion
Saving your life was my own delusion
...But you were too long dead.
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© 2006 Temerity
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On Monday, October 14, 2013, redfurrydragon
(50) wrote:
So very close to home on this one... Your view seems as mine in many ways... Dead to me, no matter the passion I had or yet have... Thank you for a great write.
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A former member wrote:
Good write. Congrats WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
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On Saturday, October 21, 2006, missanthropic
(26) wrote:
I enjoyed the pace of this...gunslinger comes to mind.
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A former member wrote:
all I can say is wow. amazing
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On Wednesday, October 11, 2006, A_Puppet_Show
(163) wrote:
Chilling, you form a strong image in language and there is strengh in the realization of the poem aswell. Tiger