All That You Were

By Temerity

Your last Hello blew rancid across my face

As I pretended not to notice the smell

Your noxious lies tripped auditory alarms

As I closed my mind to the sound

Your clothing barely covered a bloating torso

Pale flesh withered beneath shrouded disguise

Cyanotic fingers caressed dull tresses

Eyes like putrid pools stared lifeless

Desperate to resuscitate one spark of recognition

All that you were, all you could have been

All that we'd shared, dreamed, dared...

Those vital signs of life absent as your soul

I pounded your heart with fervid fists

Your pernicious resistence my preclusion

Saving your life was my own delusion

...But you were too long dead.

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© 2006 Temerity
Published on Wednesday, October 11, 2006.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • redfurrydragon On Monday, October 14, 2013, redfurrydragon (50)By person wrote:

    So very close to home on this one... Your view seems as mine in many ways... Dead to me, no matter the passion I had or yet have... Thank you for a great write.

  • A former member wrote: Good write. Congrats WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

  • missanthropic On Saturday, October 21, 2006, missanthropic (26)By person wrote:

    I enjoyed the pace of this...gunslinger comes to mind.

  • A former member wrote: all I can say is wow. amazing

  • A_Puppet_Show On Wednesday, October 11, 2006, A_Puppet_Show (166)By person wrote:

    Chilling, you form a strong image in language and there is strengh in the realization of the poem aswell. Tiger

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